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*sqqquuueeeelllll* just so you know it is 2:47 am and i just was skimming the site to see what i would read for tomorrow, sufficient to say i just couldn't wait when i seen that you updated! and with Gentle Men Ain't In Season too! my brain nearly sundered with indecision on which to read first!


tootles,
i gotta go read Gentle Men Ain't In Season now!

Whoo! So Griffin seems to have made up his mind about what he wants? It will be fun watching him go after it! What part will his family play? Surely some of them will show up to make things a little more difficult for him. Can't wait!

LOVES IT
I TRUELY DO HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON
I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE:)

Both stories were updated. Careful not to spoil me too much or i'll expect such treats all the time!!! I was very excited to read the new chapter. It was interesting to find out a little more about Sera's father--i think between the mail and her boss's reaction, there was a very clear description of how intimidating a person he is. His conversation with his daughter was just a bonus and a way to learn that Griffin has a few secrets. I can't wait to delve into those more. Loved it! The date was also very sweet and fun. My favorite part though was when Griffin was ready to turn away from Sera after he lost his nerve, but she stopped him and created an opportunity. She was the one who felt insulted and hurt, but she was ballsy and went for it...saved him the stress. Can't wait for the next chapter. On my way back to Brier Wood now to check on Jaycen (Finn reminds me a little of Jaycen. I like the way they have to push their best friends in the right direction with jealousy).

I loved it.....Girl keep it up xD!

yes I am still reading and loving this story! it was a long wait but definity worth it!! keep up the good work!

Your such a tease, just when you get them to actually get some were you end the chapter. *sniff* :) Next chapter please....

I am aware of the existence of the forum...I think I even have an account started over there. But I never use it. :/
I'm with you; I don't like the idea of moving review answers to the forum, but I understand that there are people who take up nearly as much space doing that as writing their story. I haven't actually posted anything since that announcement was made (I know, I'm terrible), so I haven't decided fully if I'm going to flout it or not. I'll probably just keep it down to 'thanks to...' and maybe a few absolutely necessary comments. As for the forum, unless you provide a link to the specific location of review responses, I can pretty much guarantee that I won't read them. Did you get a personal message asking you to refrain from including the responses in your chapter?
As for the actual chapter at hand, lovely, of course. I don't know if I mentioned it before (I know I did for 'Brier Wood' but you probably don't remember that), but I love the names you pick out (i.e. Dani). Even though phonetically it sounds the same as 'sarah' Sera is just so much more interesting. Gives me new interest in the name. Anyway, I'm sure I could sit here and think of more things to laud you for, but I think I'm going to go make myself a sandwich for lunch instead. Cheers!

Oops, I meant 'Davi' in that last review. Sorry. Dani's from a book I've read.

What is it in Griffins past that has him so gun shy? Do he and his sister share the same father? Sera is going to have to make some progress as well. Can't wait for more.