rate_review Reviews

I agree with Sniper014, I've also just finished reading chapter 18 only to find out that last update was 2 years ago. Why is it that when you come across a really good story that draws you in so much that you can't help but hit the next chapter button at the bottom of page, that when you get to the end of the chapter you find there's nothing more. This story needs - no DESERVES to be to be finished, not just for the story's sake, but for the readers who have become engrossed with the story.
PLEASE finish this, don't leave us hanging with no conclusion. That's not fair to the readers and it happens all the time.
Terry.

I finished reading all 18 chapters of this story. Are you going to finish the story or just let it be left uncompleted like so many on this site.

I just finished Chapter 6 and I had to let you know that I am in love with this story. I love the characters and their depth. They're so real and I love how Sera has commitment issues, and that Griffin, despite his looks wants something real and substantial. The dialog is great and (so far) there isn't any unnecessary drama or stuff added just to get a rise out of the readers. I like that Sera and Griffin are both cautious, nervous, shy, but attracted to one another and it takes TIME for them to overcome that. This is really good and I'm looking forward to the rest :).

Oh. My. God. Your last update was in 2012???!!!!! Are you NUTS???! Have you any idea how GOOD this story is? I mean really. Seriously. It's rich and a great read, not shallow like a lot of stories. What happened??? If you are still breathing then you have to finish this! Please please please please please please please please UPDATE! Please! Even if you get a writer's block I'll try to talk you through it lol. Please update!

UPDATE PLEASE

You are seriously a gifted writer! I read all 18 chapters in 2 days. I am addicted to this story. Please review soon. Also, you made me fall in love with Griffin

OMG so good. I can't wait to see what Griffin will do when he hears toolbag Rivers is in town!! Update soon.

Hello there,

Just thought I'd let you know that your formatting on chapter eight is skewed. The chapter is "squished". Possibly caused by the RTE update, I'm not sure. Thought you'd like to know.

Yeah! I've missed your stories...it's so great to see them updated. I can't wait to read more. Now that they are both going against themselves, I can't wait to see where they end up. It's so great the way you wrote how they fight their routines to make this work. It all seems right, but it still isn't that easy...they need to work for it.

oh man i LOVE you for updating!!
i was so scared when i saw this update that it would be an authors note saying 'sorry but this story will be discontinued, i have writers block'!

cheers, you made my night :)