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by Passhenette1

person 4Eva . . .
schedule August 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh gosh passh, omg, I just literally love you so much, to da max! have anyone told you, that you are the greastest master of all the great master writer there is in this world of writers? well if you dont yet, then you should now! youre skillfully skilled and I just love you so much, I can't even. ugh, you are just drop dead amazing with your stories, I can't even, udnuikfejjknreincuridke. I LOVE YOU, ok. youre amazing, I love authors who can, make me feel so, idk, so, happy and in da cloud! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I love your stories, and I love you. thank da lawd for good writer like you, thank da lawd. I love your charac. they're so awesome and full of surprises. you are an amazing author, and will always be my top favorite author of all times, i promise. :D now to sleep, have a wonderful day passh! byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! I love you passh . . . passh . . . passh . . *echo, echo, echo 4E . . . .*
person Mint
schedule April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story was wonderful and bittersweet since Aren is dead but he supposedly can be with Brendan in real life tho. I was kinda upset at the end how we never really find out if Aren was THERE with him or if he's gone crazy imagining it was Aren. I like to believe that Aren is truly there and possessing those guys. Anyway loved this lots xD
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha. hahaha. hahahaha!

I wasn't sure if I'd like this story, and from the title/summary, I definitely didn't expect the actual plot! I loved your mix of dirty smuttiness with the emotional "I'm going crazy because I can see my dead lover"-seriousness part.

If your muse hits again, I'd be interested in seeing how Aren and Brenden make it work in the long-run... or not? :P I'm also a fan of your Carnalli series, so please keep those coming.
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!! This was SO hott! I loved Aren's character, and Brens! I feel sad that Bren had lost Aren to death, but I'm still happy that they're still "together" XD Tho, I think Aren should find a body to keep (know idea how that would work XD) and be with Bren in the living ^_^ AWESOME story matey!!!! As usual *wink wink* lol
person kylee123
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting ending. I wish I had a ghost friend to help me out like that. The characters are very interesting. Aren refuses to say goodbye to Brendan and Brendan obviously is still in love with Aren. I wonder what will become of them eventually.
person kylee123
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story gets first prize for freaky! I am at chapter two. I am eager to see how this story turns out.
person miles
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great but disturbing story !
I Like your stories very much and your writing is always good...
Thanks for sharing this
person Mezzer52
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This story was disturbingly hot! Part of me wanted to be grossed out about the possession, but, honestly, it was really hot! I was always a big fan of x-man growing up, and I always thought about having some kind of telepathy to control all the hot guys around me so that they would all want me. So this story was able to drum up some good memories of past straight hotties in my life. Thanks so much for writing the story! I hope this little story, was able to get the creative juices flowing again for your Carnalli story, which I absolutely love, but I don't think I've reviewed for. Take care and have fun writing!
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story so far, but I have one question. You mentioned Brenden is a junior in college, which would make him about 20. He was supposed to be 7 yrs. older than Aren, which would mean if Aren were alive, he'd be 13????? Or did I read it wrong? How old was Aren?
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, really interesting story! So, Brenden was really crazy, huh? Very original story; I'd like to read more if you continue...