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Damn, that was hot.

I seriously think I'm going to read and probably review all of your stories ^^

So I checked up your proffie, and yay! A prequel! I love it 8D
Yeah, gotta have safe smex. And that's for all sexual orientations, really.
That was a lovely oneshot. It was the smex.
Smex bomb ;]

Tristan and Hayden are so cute! I remember reading this story before, I didn't know that you made it! More Tristan and Hayden stories, Please! Pretty please with cherries on top?

sequel!!!!!!!!! tristan is just hot:D i like the tough boy image you portray him as=) sequel?:D

wow, it's been a long time since I last saw such talent at writing erotica. Most peoples sex scene just resemble porn, in and out with no talent. However your writing has a sensual quality in it. Not to mention you have no idea how glad at how you made tristen's character. Especially how he resisted even after the sex, and has a strong will. It makes me really angry to see writing where the writer makes a strong seme and then makes them weak willed in the wrong moments. I know that Tristen had to give in, but for the sake of protesting, he has to! and you did that transition very well. And I also loved it that while there were others participating, it didn't go to far, just the write amout. I like tease and a bit of anst, but I can't stand for outwrite cheating. Anyway, i don't usually review peoples work, but after reading your story, i though you deserved it. Keep up the good work, and I hope to see more stories with these pairings. Even if you don't go really deep into plot, I think that you can make several onshots with a little plot with this pairing. ;)

Hmm.. for your first oneshot this is not bad. I really like Tristan, he seems like an interesting character that could really be explored. Hayden seems a little flat but he has some real potential. I've already read "Field Trip: The Bus Ride" and it was a lot of fun. I hope you continue to write about these two, it seems like there could be much more to tell.

I'll keep an eye out on your author page. I really like your writing style and will be back for more.

Also, my name's LAW and I run The GreyLAW Database. If you're ever in the mood to chat I'd be happy to hear from you. My email is law12.k@gmail.com.

Thanks so much for the wonderful writing,
LAW

I've read both of your stories with Tristan and Hayden and I love them both! I've re-read both of them many times already and thought it was time I actually commented and let you know how much I loved them.

“Again…I have a cummy booty, don’t make me walk.”
Has to be one of the funniest quotes from a slash story that I've ever read. I laugh every time I read it.

I hope you continue with this pair. I wouldn't mind seeing more of them in fact I would love to see more of them. Something about Tristan's not quite sure he is gay but is going to go along with it and Hayden's eager sexuality is very attractive and gives a very nice read.

Great job!

good story, and massage. i didnt rely like the mark and ryan guy but yeah grate story and i too have a friend that has hiv but that cuz his wife didnt tell him she had it and gave it to him grrrr but none the less im becomeing a fan of ur storys...

that was cute and quirky! Hayden is pretty funny.

Tristan did give in rather quickly but like you said it was a one shot and it was getting a little lengthy.

i'm off to read the next one and hopefully we'll see more of tristan in hayden. Let hayden corrupt tristan!!!!