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Great story, I would only suggest that you watch your tenses so that the reader has an easier time!
Do continue!
XoXO

That was so great!! Thank you for the many updates!!! The firephoenix form was fantastic!!! I can't understand why the demon king is so nice but I start to like him!! Doesn't Marcus search maya?? Doesn't he realizes it??? Well hope to see you soon!!!!

Chapter five was great. I am caught between laughing at Sony and feeling sorry for her. I guess she got a fitting punishment since she was going to kill Maya. I liked Marcus and Cain's drunken night together. LOL. Too bad Alistair and Dan are on opposing sides. Alistair seems to be taking the wrong approach to Dan. I love Maya and the Demon King. Maya seems to arouse the demon king's protective nature. The demon king seems to be getting attached if he is looking deep into Maya's eyes. I love it. Please keep up the good writing. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for the new chapter. The relationship between Dan and Alistair is so interessting. They are stuggling so hard with each other and yet they are in love too. If only Alistair was not so evil. It will be interesting to see if Dan will be able to escape with Maya. I also wonder if Dan will try to kill Maya like he promised Maya's father. The story is really going well I love Saria and Jarrett. They are a hilarious match. I had a good laugh when Saria woke up to find Jarrett snuggled beside him. I am glad that Jarrett is being patient with Saria. Marcus and Cain are very cute together too. It will be interesting when they find out that they are supposed to be enemies. I am really looking forward to the next chapter. Please keep up the good writing.

Chapter 3 wa great. I think Alistair is going crazy. Does he really love Dan to treat him like that? Are you leaving the sex scenes out of this one? It is funny how nice Cain is when he is not out destroying people. Little did he know he was rescuing is enemy. I wonder if the demon king caused Maya to change or if it was just the right time. I hope Maya will be able to defend himself from Sony because I am sure she is going to want to destroy him. the story is going great. You are really writing up a storm. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Hurray! Thanks for the new chapter. This story looks like it is going to have a lot of action. Exciting! I am guessing that the demon king is keeping Maya on the bed of ice to weaken his phoenix powers. I can see that Sony is getting more jealous by the minute. Is Sony a human or some kind of demon? Saria and Jarret seem to off to a good start. I am eager to Find out the story behind Alistair and Dan. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Aw this is so graet!!! I really hope they will rescue maya!!!! Am I right to asume that Maya is so weak cause it is cold and his element is fire??? I really hope to see more from you soon!!!!

I like the new story! I am sorry that Saria had to lose his family. I can,t wait to read more

That was really a great start!!! i wonder if Maya has power of wich he does not know!!! I really want more!!! Hope to see you soon!!!