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Gr8 story :) I rly love it. So pretty pls update soon :)

Poor Dan has been carrying such a heavy burden all by himself. This explains why he would not tell Maya all the detail about why he should not be with demon king. It is very hard to change destiny. Obviously, the demon king and Maya are well suited to each other. They make a very hot couple. I am eager to see how Kai will react when he finds out that Maya is already pregnant. That will be awesome. I hope Dan will be able to let go of Maya and focus on his own life and maybe his relationship with Alistair. ( My favorite tragic couple LOL) I wonder if Alexis will miss Val now that he has left him behind.

I am so happy that Marcus and Cain are finally together. I was not expecting that Marcus would be pregnant. I am also happy that Alec seems attracted to Ian. I am eager to see what Alexis is going to do with Val now that he is planning to leave him. All this time Val has been having his way with him. They have a bitter relationship right now. I wonder how Val will react when Alexis leaves him? Happy Holidays! I am looking forward to the new chapter.

Yikes! How could Marcus get married to Ian when he loves Cain? It is so tragic. My heart is breaking for the two of them. I loved Maya's night with Kai the Demon King. Very sexy. Those two are definitely meant for each other. I am sure Dan will not be happy. I feel that Dan has a good heart but he has been dealing with everything in the wrong way. He did not even tell Maya about his past and his special powers. Maybe the burden of taking care of Maya was too much for Dan to handle. Plus it has kept him away from Alistair for all these years. I hope they will be able to work things out. Lovely chapter. Thanks for the fast update

Awesome chapter! My heart is so sad for Alistair and Dan. Also for Cole and Jude and poor Alexis. I can't wait for Maya and the demon king to do the deed but I get the feeling the mysterious newcomer will interfere with that. When will Alistair ever learn how to deal with Dan? My heart will be happy when those two learn to show love for each other. The story is going great. I can't wait to read more.

I like the story and the characters I just have a few things to point out and ask......So my frist question is why is that everyone has a name even the red demon but yet the demon king is simply refferd to as th demon king......why doenst he have a name too? Your grammer is a little backwards and I found myself rereading certain lines. You use the wrong tenses for certain words like I dont know sometime you use the present tense an past tense in the same sentence. A suggestion you dont have to take it would be to look out for the tenses thing and when a new character is talk to seperate the lines because sometimes it gets confusing on who is talking. Other than that I love your story I cant wait to see more of Nora I think thats it sry if its wrong even though Im loving Maya's charcter I like that one better. i cant wait for your next update i hope its soon.

Anthony and Gareth make a great pair. i think Anthony will be attacked pretty soon. He is such a tease. I am sorry for Alistair. He is such a confused man. He needs to claim Dan before that Alex guy tries to make a move on Dan. I am sad that Dan had to lose his baby. I was hoping that he and Alistair would resolve their differences. It seems that Dan is carrying too many secrets. He can't eve tell Maya what is going on. Alistair loves Dan but as long as Alistair remains with the demon king, he will continue to do evil things. It makes me so sad. I just hope Alec will keep his hands to himself. Love the new chapter. I am looking forward to the next one.

Anthony and Gareth alone together for one week? Sounds exciting. Anthony is probably going to get in trouble with Gareth. I am glad that Marcus and Cain have a week together. Is Marcus looking for Saria? I am somewhat sorry for Jude but not too sorry since he has put Alexis in the same situation. It is good that Cole is taking some revenge for Alexis. As always, Dan and Alistair are the couple that I worry about the most. They seem to be stuck in a tragic situation. I hope they can start loving each other. Especially if Dan is pregnant. Alistair has been approaching Dan the wrong way. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for the super awesome new chapter. I missed this story. Alexis and Val are hot but Cole will be heartbroken to find out that his fiance has been stolen. The whole episode with Alexis was hilarious. I wonder what will become of Dan and Alistair. They are such a heartbreaking couple. I hope they can find some happiness together. I thought for sure that Sony would end up dead after attacking Maya. I guess Nora is Maya's inner demon. He seems to really like the demon king. I am eager to see what will happen with Marcus and Cain. This story is always exciting to read. I love it.

The story sounds very interesting and promising, but you should probably have it beta read. My own English grammar is horrible , but even I found quite a number of mistakes. I believe, if only it was edited it would become extremely popular. Anyway , I wish it and you success.