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LOL! Poor Gareth being lead around by Anthony. I wonder if Gareth will ever bed the boy and if Dan will hook up with Alec.

Wah! I can't believe that Cain was X-ed at the end of chapter 11. Woot! I love the flow of your story and the unexpected twist and turns of the plot is well put together. I can't wait to read what happens next. Great work!

Hahahahaha. I wonder if Dan and Alister will ever meet their son Marcus and what their thoughts are to know that he's now bonded to Cain with their grandson on the way. Now Gareth and Anthony, those two are the most hilarious couple through out this story. I can't wait to see how their relationship will develop. Keep up the great work!

With just the first paragraph of your story, your writing has much improvements. I'll be able to give a better review after I've read the chapter.

I think I am in love with this story no.. I KNOW i am in love with this story*smiles* u are one of my new favorite author :)

Lovely chapter. I am so happy that Dan and Alistair are finally together. Alistair's heart has been broken for the past twenty years. Dan's parents were cruel to force him to break up with Alistair and to hide the baby from him. I also got a good laugh out of Kai's surprise. I am very excited for both of them.

Hurray for Gareth and Anthony! I can just see the servant's face when he walked in on their pillow battle! These two were long overdue for some smes and it seems Anthony really enjoyed it. It sounds like Alec is very happy to be going back to Ian's castle. I think thay will make an awesome couple. I hope that it is Dan who has found Alistair. I hope something good will finally happen between our star crossed lovers.

Well sort of I've caught up with chapters 12-13 so I'm still a little behind but still just wanted to say I continue to love this story its so cute! :) Maya and Kai make a cute couple:X:X

Dan has had such a tragic life. So many bad things have happened to him over the years and he has lost so many children. First he thought Marcus was dead and then he just lost the baby that he was carrying for Alistair. I think perhaps that Dan has been denying his own heart for so long, that he does not even know right from wrong anymore. Maybe that is why he was willing to kill Maya's baby. I hope Dan and Alistair will finally be able to be together and I hope that they will be able to have another baby. This story is so moving. I am sure that Marcus will be happy to finally meet his parents. Good writing. I hope to read more soon.

Alistair and Dan are really two of a kind. They both do crazy things when they are desperate. Dan has been keeping Maya all this time without telling him about his past. Alistair has been doing bad things for so many years because of his obsession with Dan. I am sorry for both of them. I am glad that Maya forgave Dan for trying to kill his baby. I think that Ramsey owes a big debt to Dan for having to take care of Maya and hide him from the Demon king for all these years. I am glad that Vai came to find Alexis. I can't wait to see what happens with Jude and Cole.