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I wonder who it was that tricked and raped Saria? It is so sad that Saria will have to carry some other man's baby. Jarret should never have left him behind. I also wonder who pushed Marcus into the river. These guys are all going through a hard time. I hope things get better soon.

I like the idea of this story but it is a little too hard for me to read. You should consider finding a beta. When you self edit watch what tense you're writing in.

Lovely new chapter. I hope Saria did not go and get himself kidnapped. His heart is probably broken because of Jarrett. However Jarrett should have said something to him before he left. I am mad at Alistair. It seems he will never learn. He had Dan's love and he is still getting into trouble. I laughed at his excuse that he only promised to try to change. I was quite shocked about Maya and Nora. I did not know that maya was always capable of being so violent. I was also sad about Koliyan. I hope Val will be able to be a good husband to Alexis without her good advice. I hope Alistair will be able to get back into Dan's good graces - even though he does not deserve it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

LOL. Anthony and Gareth are so cute together. I can't help laughing because Anthony is going to triple murder Gareth when he realizes that he is pregnant. Plus it seems that Julian is already with Gareth's father. There will soon be a family reunion. Saria is certainly being grumpy after he said all those sweet things to Jarrett earlier. Jarrett will have to come up with some way to keep Saria happy while he is stuck in bed with his injured leg. At least Saria is safe for the moment. I can't wait to see what happens next.

How did I miss that you had updated?*starts read *

Great chapter. I don't know how I missed the update. I am so happy that Ian and Alec are together. They are a really sweet couple. Gareth and Anthony are hilarious. Gareth is wearing poor Anthony out. Poor Anthony will be pregnant very quickly if Gareth keeps this up. I am so happy that Saria did not get kidnapped. Now he knows that someone is after him. It is very cute to see Saria and Jarrett falling in love. I am really looking forward to the next update.

I love that Saria and Jarrett are getting closer. They make a really cute couple and I admire Jarrett for being so gentle with Saria. I see that danger is lurking about. I hope Saria will avoid being kidnapped or worse. If only the demon king knew that he and Val are both expecting babies at the same time. I feel sorry for Alexis because he is attracted to Val but he does not feel loved. Maya on the other hand is sure that Kai will take care of him. Very nice love scenes. I hope Jarett will get to seduce Saria a little more before the trouble begins.

I love how you caught my attention with a snap like touch at the beginning of chapter one. It brings to attention quickly that things are starting off right away and the whole chapter kept me wondering what will happen next. I'll be reading some more chapters before I give another review or I might just end up giving one at the end of the next chapter. Great work in catching the attention of the reader, and leaving them with anticipation for the next chapter at the end.

ROFL! I love how Saria had horse manure ready for Jarret's arrival. What a welcome home expression.

Woot! Love the appearance of Nora. And will Jarrett take away the life of his beautiful Marcus? What of Alexis and the 'cruel' demon king Val?