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for The Doll House

by Jetfire

person L.S.
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahaha oh man, that chapter was great! very funny ;) And I really liked how you didn't do the typical "alfredo sauce" "vanilla ice cream" spiel! haha never thought that risotto could have the effect, but you certainly made it so! haha brilliant! and I read your author's notes last time-i'm soooo sorry you lost your files!! that's so unfortunate : ( but this chapter turned out very well! i'm sure you'll "recover" them just fine! ^^;
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL. Poor Nathaniel, Elliot doesn't even realize what he's doing to him. He loves to cook though so it's not his fault if that comes out in his speech. *giggle*
person L.S.
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh I really like this! not quite what I was expecting so I am soooo excited to see what happens next!! hahah also, Nathaniel is crazy. lol though I can't judge since the idea is not that bad haha ^^;
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! ^^ So glad you updated cannot wait for more, it is a cute yet sexy? Story xD
I love the boys in dresses! Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!
person Mai
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is cute! Hope you continue soon!
person Sarkukka
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting story! I'm looking forward to read more about these beautiful dolls and their Master. There're so many promises of love. =)
Please update soon!
person Kurai
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is too hot and cute and hot and did i say cute? what about hot?
Anyway, i hope there is a chance you're still working on this fic? *puppy eyes*
person animekid
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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nothing else I can say but that......since my brain isn't working

love the concept