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for The Doll House

by Jetfire

schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
O_O WHAT!!!!!!!!!!! OMG I was like OMG >.< That was a stellar chapter I was sad to see it end >.< Nathaniel had it coming to him though he shouldn't have lied -shakes head- And how could he lose his patience with Elliot I mean, so mean. I'm sure Izzy is happy at least at the fact though he got his feelings to Seth now lol
person eatmorefish
schedule March 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! can't wait to see what happens next!! :)
schedule March 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh I kinda saw this coming when it was kept from Elliot. And i'm sure that all the hurtful things they said was because of the anger and irritation during the heat of the argument so I hop they'll make up though at the same time I kinda hope Elliot will make Nathaniel work for it to get him back xDD I mean he has his own dreams right? Maybe in order to forget him, Elliot will push all his effort into making his dream come true? Hmmm...
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was hot
person wynja
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story to bits, still... very sweet and very hot chapter... I want an anime based on this... get rich and make one! ;)
schedule February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope you're feeling better. I'm very glad to read more about your sweet dolls.
schedule February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*____* ohhhh yay! finally all the teasing has come to an end! And it's pretty obvious that the too have the hots for each other. But how will they fare when Elliot have the choice to be free and pursuit his ultimate dream xD Can't wait for next chapter!! I hope the other boys in the Doll House will get with the one they like. It's so cute to see them blush >w<
schedule February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I hope you're feeling better! :)

Is Reike your beta? You should always thank your beta for helping! I proof some stories on here and I personally feel slighted when an author doesn't thank me. A lot of time and effort goes into proofing, so it's always nice to be acknowledged.

Anyway, awesome chapter! So Nathaniel (did I spell that right?) finally got Elliot! Good for him! lol

Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
schedule February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
More more! I think that was absolutely sweet though I also can't wait for the big bombshell to drop >.<
person wynja
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah, loving it! Such a fun and smexy chapter! Good luck on that trip and come back son to update! Write on the plane! ;)