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August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love Izzy! I was kind of hoping, in my sadistic way, that Seth wouldn't accept his love so that Izzy could mope and it would be so cute and heartbreaking! I adore him anyway. Also, I like when the main character has a temper and can hold their ground. Go Elliot!
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April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a sweet ending to a sweet story! Great job; it was highly entertaining and always amusing! :) I look forward to reading more from you!
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April 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww... so cute and romantic! I'm glad you might write more from this universe I really like it! I just hope I don't miss it if you do... I hate that this site doesn't have an alert-system... Well, maybe you can concider naming the story smething will "doll" or Dollhouse" in the title, that will probably make me notice it even if it's years from now, because I don't think I'll forget this story any time soon!
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April 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lovely ending!! Thanks for finishing your story, and I'll be looking for your next stories in the site. Hoping they are about Izzy... (Giggles);)
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March 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the timeline. So Elliot left after three years, and in that time he went to culinary school and opened up his own restaurant. Which is great. But in that time, Nathanial or is it Nathaniel? Anyway, in that time Nate (haha) couldn't do any paperwork or had trouble concentrating on his work? Then he'd be out of a Dollhouse, no? Anyway, sorry to be picky....
I'm glad Elliot's back and in Nate's arms! I'm glad their friends (employees) saw how miserable they were without each other and finally stepped in to do something about it! :)
I'm glad Elliot's back and in Nate's arms! I'm glad their friends (employees) saw how miserable they were without each other and finally stepped in to do something about it! :)
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March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was just wonderful! But is this the end? It seemed like an ending, but it didn't SAY "the End" so I'm still hoping... anyway, if you still like this universe, you could write more from it but use other characters... like maybe an patron falls head over heels for one of the boys... I'm just trying to make this universe not end, can you tell? ;)
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March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
1. Sorry for not reviwing last chapter, the Izzy's scene was hot and lovely at the same time...
2. Did I tell you that I love that pink little guy? He made me laugh, a lot. His kidnapping plan was just hilarious...
2. Did I tell you that I love that pink little guy? He made me laugh, a lot. His kidnapping plan was just hilarious...
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March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So how much time has passed from the end of the last chapter to this chapter? It seems like a lot; Elliot graduated from culinary school and opened his own restaurant? Then it must be years, no? And they're still pining over each other? That may be true love....lol :)
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March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Have no idea why I hade two new chapters to read this time, must have missed one... damn this site for not having an alert-system!
Loooo ve this story, and I'm so sad for the boys now! Hope they both stop being stubborn! ;) But, yeah, I understand the betrayal... damn, he should have just told him at once...
Loooo ve this story, and I'm so sad for the boys now! Hope they both stop being stubborn! ;) But, yeah, I understand the betrayal... damn, he should have just told him at once...
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March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hahah, yeah, I really need to get a life! lol I do read a lot. But I look at it this way: I used to read tons of magazines, People, Us, etc., but now I can read that all online! It's just not People or Us; it's gay porn. Hey, everyone has to make some sacrifices.....
Woah! What just happened???? Did the happy couple just break up? And Elliot finally found out Nate was stringing him up. Well, not really, but he was purposely keeping him there for his own pleasure. Tsk, tsk.
Great chapter; looking forward to the next one! :)
Woah! What just happened???? Did the happy couple just break up? And Elliot finally found out Nate was stringing him up. Well, not really, but he was purposely keeping him there for his own pleasure. Tsk, tsk.
Great chapter; looking forward to the next one! :)