rate_review Reviews

No, I am not dead. So I'm going to agree with what the previous reviewer said, in that this story works well as a stand-alone as well as a potential first chapter. But don't you have a couple other stories in progress as it is? And where CAN you go with this that hasn't already been done before? Nevertheless, it was a great story and I enjoyed reading it. ~Young Sage
P.S.: You used "cacophony" in a sentence. You are now awesome (though you were awesome before). I bow to you in submission, Oh Literate One.

This was lovely. It is open to be continued, but works very well as a stand alone piece as well. Thank you for posting this!

I like the story so far; I hope you continue. It's so sad about Chris's brother. What happened? And how old are they all?