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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, for your first story this is really excellent! There were a few small grammar/spelling erros but nothing a quick proofread or beta can't fix :) I like the name of the robots as well, very cute ;) I can't wait to see where you take this story.
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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww azale seems cute
can't wait for some more chapters <3
can't wait for some more chapters <3
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it already and look forward to reading more soon!
P.S. I like you user name, very creative. :)
P.S. I like you user name, very creative. :)