schedule
October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg..u have to update this quickly becuase its so damn good. Great story and now im really wanting to know what is going to happen next. Please keep posting your story up..PLEEEEEASE!
schedule
October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful start! Seems like this could be a pretty interesting plot when all is said and done. I know the feeling about wanting reviews, Im a sucker for them myself ;)
schedule
October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 was wonderful. I really like the relationship between Jamie and Azale. What? Bad things ahead? Not too bad I hope and I hope they get to have some wonderful sex and maybe fall in love before the bad things show up. I love the story. I am looking forward to the next chapter
schedule
October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was glad to find a new chapter added and hope that you will continue as you have left us with a bit a tease.
We are getting to know our two guys a little more and I look forward to Dad's visit. He has to be pretty cool if he is open enough to send his son a gift like Azale. :)
We are getting to know our two guys a little more and I look forward to Dad's visit. He has to be pretty cool if he is open enough to send his son a gift like Azale. :)
schedule
October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I will do my best to always review :) I like Jamie's dad - kinda reminds me of my mom, always wanting more information than I'm willing to give! I was confused about the mood shifts - kinda like a never ending cycle if Azale hadn't explained things. Love the foreshadowing, can't wait to see what happens to the boys!
schedule
October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to be one of the ones that read, but did not review. I'm loving the story, Azalle is a sweetie. It worries me that they seems to be headed for trouble. Being a sucker for a happy story, I want love, flowers, music, and hot sex to abound! ;) I'll be here, waiting for updates!
Please keep writing. And thanks for sharing!
Please keep writing. And thanks for sharing!
schedule
October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay they are happier together now. I am busy so can't review that much but I like it so here is your review lol.
schedule
October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAA!!!! You can't leave it there!!! Talk about a cliffy jeeze!!! Must have more!!!! MORE!!!!
schedule
October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Of course, my smutty self just wants to get to the robotical bopping but I do appreciate a good story. Keep writing. You have readers, even if they are too shy/busy to write a review, the counter counts and so do the clickies.
So get to the smex! Hahahaha. Just kept writing. You're doing fine.
So get to the smex! Hahahaha. Just kept writing. You're doing fine.
schedule
October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like these first chapters.Azale seems to be much more than a "robot" and to have some feelings of his own.I hope we'll have the next chapter soon !