rate_review Reviews

for not speaking english as a first your pretty good as writing it the others need to go finger themselves as far as i care i love your originals but i cant write very well my spelling is so bad most times that spell check never finds the right words

This is the second story of yours that I've read and I've liked both. Especially this one. I love mermaids and have recently discovered a love for mer-creatures and this story was fantastic. This really was well written (considering English is your second language). While I do think you need a beta to clear some things up, it's not super important for me. I truely like to be slightly confused when reading something.
Another postive for this story was the background story/culture of the Merpeople (forgot what they're actually called). That was darned great! I also liked that it took Dean awhile to really like Noon.
*happy grin*

Thanks for sharing!!

Please! Please! Please! Update.This is a grate story.

You continued it! ^________^ I'm so happy. I haven't been reading stories for some time now because of my school, but now as I was going checking to see if you've updated, I saw that you had updated 2 of your stories some time ago. :) I think it was great that Dean got to heal and the kids sound so cute. I hope to read more about Hirssah and to learn the names of the other kids. :D

I'm also glad that you didn't stop writing even though some people hurt you. Your English is getting better and better with every chapter. Not that it was as bad as you seem to think it was before. :) I'm sorry to hear you've been having problems in your life and I hope that things are getting better now. I was getting a bit worried that something bad had happened to you but I'm glad that you've continued writing.

I found this just a bit over a week after my birthday again, so it was a birthday gift all over again. Thanks for the good story! :)

I would just like to take this moment to say how much i love your stories, i avidly check to see if you have updated and am always ecstatic when i find something new to read. I hope you keep up your writing and keep giving you fans like myself things to look forward too.

I'm sooo happy you are back!! This was absoloutly fabolous!! I totally like noons pet he is so sweet!! And I love the babys!! They are so cute!! You ideas were wunderful again with the colorings and the meanings!! Absoloutly fantastic!! I so love that you are back!! And I so love this story!! Great!! I really hope that you will now update you other wonderful storys too!! *Feel hugged and cuddeled by me* Hope to see you again soon!!!

I am sooo glad to see you writing again! I have fallen in love with your stories and your great mythical creatures. I am so sorry that people had to fuss over a few little typos and grammer problems. As someone who is native english and trying to learn german (and failing) I think you are doing a wonderful job! So many people who grow up with a language are terrible with it, and your writing is by far some of the most inventive and detailed. I can imagine the story so clearly from your words. I hope your personal life comes to order, and that you feel happy and inspired enough to write again. SO many people love your work, and through it, you.

OMG! OMG! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! You are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MISSED YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!! *cries* Don't EVER do that again!!! *Sobs*

It is so wonderful to see you back. You have been missed so very much.
We love your stories and hope one day you will be able to continue them.
We are sorry for all that you have had to go through we hope it is or will get
better for you.
Ignore the bullies we found that when we were bullied it was better to just ignore
them and not give them the attention they seek.
We send you lots of hugs and encouragement.
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OMG! OMGOMGOMG!!! Thank you so much! *hugs tightly* I can't believe you wrote something so awesome and dedicated it to me. <3 I love it and would love to read more of it. It's really interesting concept. ^^ I'm sorry that it took so long for me to notice and read it but I've been sick for the past month and got back to reading fics in aff.net just this week. I'm so happy that I decided to check if you had updated your fics and found this wonderful surprise. :) Seriously, I love you! I'd love to see if Dean could get to love Noon and how his reunion with his family would be like. ^___________________^ *is supremely happy*