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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nope, It didn't fit, but I liked it nonetheless.
Poor chick... Nothing you can do to move get out of the situation, so she just has to find some way to move on.
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Poor chick... Nothing you can do to move get out of the situation, so she just has to find some way to move on.
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October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Technically though, several of Micheal Phelps' sponsors dropped him when that picture of him smoking the bong got leaked... Just in case you want to mention that..."
Yes they did. On the other hand, he's got 2 commercials running right now. May's DVD will be in the stores in the next chapter. One of the things that I will address will be her endorsement deals. It'll make sense. Thanks for keeping me on my toes. Even though it's a story, I want it to be logical.
Yes they did. On the other hand, he's got 2 commercials running right now. May's DVD will be in the stores in the next chapter. One of the things that I will address will be her endorsement deals. It'll make sense. Thanks for keeping me on my toes. Even though it's a story, I want it to be logical.
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Still insanely interesting, can't wait for more
Technically though, several of Micheal Phelps' sponsors dropped him when that picture of him smoking the bong got leaked... Just in case you want to mention that...
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Technically though, several of Micheal Phelps' sponsors dropped him when that picture of him smoking the bong got leaked... Just in case you want to mention that...
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October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"So... How exactly does he plan to not get his ass thrown into prison for this?"
Don't worry, there's a very simple explanation coming. I just need to find time to type it up. Hopefully, at some point this weekend I'll be able to post it.
Don't worry, there's a very simple explanation coming. I just need to find time to type it up. Hopefully, at some point this weekend I'll be able to post it.
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chap. Her reactions are somehow oddly believable. And it's kind of sexy to see her starting to enjoy it.
So... How exactly does he plan to not get his ass thrown into prison for this?
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So... How exactly does he plan to not get his ass thrown into prison for this?
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October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
MOAR
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September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the reviews. I really appreciate the input.
I woke up with this whole story in my head about a week ago. I've just been so busy I haven't had time to write it all even though, as nocontact said, it's really short. I will have a new chapter up by tomorrow.
I welcome all input: good, bad, or indifferent.
I woke up with this whole story in my head about a week ago. I've just been so busy I haven't had time to write it all even though, as nocontact said, it's really short. I will have a new chapter up by tomorrow.
I welcome all input: good, bad, or indifferent.
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
MOAR
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very well written, and uber-intresting. My only complaint is that it's a bit short...
Update soon! I want to read the rest!
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Update soon! I want to read the rest!
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