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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This waas such a good chapter. The ending was so sad. I really wanted Frej to do something to help the doll. Now it seems tha Frej might be an experiment too. How intriguing. The story is very well written. Good luck with your computer. The story is great so please keep going at it.
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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aaah! I just realized that the doll was not malfunctioning at all. Someone has been using him covertly and now they have killed Mr. Devonier and they are erasing Glashira's memory to cover their evil tracks! I hope they will not get away with this.
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October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is getting interesting!! Please continue!
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September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Melting the Ice is very good. Very exciting. Frej would freak if he knew that they had Glashira following him. I am guessing that Frej has some undeveloped powers too with the fangs and all. I can't wait for chapter two. Keep up the good work.
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September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this, its very mysterious. Would like to see more plz xx
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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing; much different than a lot of stories on here. I'd love to read more. How does the assassin get out of his tank? And is he in Frej's apt. to protect him? Great first chapter!
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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. It looks like its going to be a good story. So please continue and keep up the good work. And is Frej human? or something
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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! The doll has feelings! I love where this story is going yo!
Please update as soon as you can :)
I'M BEGGING YOU!!
Please update as soon as you can :)
I'M BEGGING YOU!!