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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You update fast and I was ill, I didn't have time to read and comment. Ho well, It's give me three chapter to read in one go.
I appreciate your well built, original and not cliche story. This may-november story's really touch me. That you didn't go in the predictable close top/bottom relationship's a good point to me. They're strong but not perfect. David reaction to the payment proposition appears to be related to an old relationship.
Wait (with hope loll) to see an explication in your next chapter.
Gwen.
p.s. English's not my mother tongue, hope you can understand me well!
I appreciate your well built, original and not cliche story. This may-november story's really touch me. That you didn't go in the predictable close top/bottom relationship's a good point to me. They're strong but not perfect. David reaction to the payment proposition appears to be related to an old relationship.
Wait (with hope loll) to see an explication in your next chapter.
Gwen.
p.s. English's not my mother tongue, hope you can understand me well!
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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, what stupid things to say from Chris... I really love a bit of drama.
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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Was David having flashbacks of his old boyfriend? Was that what was spooking him? Chris must be shocked; getting all those mixed signals. David touching him, then running away. I'm looking forward to the next chapter; hopefully David will explain.m
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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapters. I am sad the David ran away from all that wonderful sexual tension. Things were going so well. I wonder what kind of memories are tormenting him. I hope he and Chris can make it up. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just discovered this story, and it is really good. I love both of our main characters, and even the minor characters are entertaining (the poor goth girl in the internet cafe was great). Keep up the great work!
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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, Ramen... yummy, also the guys sound very appetizing. I feel like i seen the sparks fly between them.
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Seems that Chris has that charisma; everyone seems to like him. I like the fact that they're trying to get to know one another before anything else happens. This is such a good story!
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September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! I love the chemistry between David and Chris. Should be interesting at David's place.
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September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The first two chapters are great. They are so well written. I already love David and Chris. I am dying for some David/Chris action. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's how they met!!!!!!!!
Thank you!
I found them cute. Yeah I know that they are growing up, but they are cute loll
Thank you!
I found them cute. Yeah I know that they are growing up, but they are cute loll