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February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I want more & I'm sorry I'm always so impatient.
I always look for your stuff & I can't believe I just found this
I want more & I'm sorry I'm always so impatient.
I always look for your stuff & I can't believe I just found this
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December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
finally, i found the time to read this and enjoyed it thoroughly. thanks a lot! and i can´t wait to read more of david and chris. i enjoyed that you really take your time to build up the scenes without losing sight of the story. it even made me realize how much i miss japanese food. :)
all the best, rain ^^
all the best, rain ^^
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November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another very hot scene in this perfect play of love. Even if this takes some time, i will for sure wait for more... And if you feel like writing on this gorgeous characters, i would of course love more outtakes or special scens like the dungeon ;)
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November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I stumbled across this story the other day, and couldn't get around to reviewing until just now. Needless to say, I love it! The characters are so opposite it's adorable. I can't wait to see how their friends react, or how things turn out. Thank you for brightening my usually crappy days with some good original fiction. :)
Truly yours,
Brittany
Truly yours,
Brittany
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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, all I can say is OUCH!!!!!! Hahaha Those barbells must hurt up the old Hershey highway, no? And wait, wouldn't they hurt Chris? If they're pulled this way and that? Just curious.....
P.S. I'm glad you're updating this; I thought you forgot all about it.
P.S. I'm glad you're updating this; I thought you forgot all about it.
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September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww poor David, being offered sex for his kindly, generous offer! Damn, shoulda taken it! Hah, j/k Anyway, good chapter; at least they both know they're on the same page!
And I can just see David "stalking" Chris and going to every performance of the play! I look forward to the next chapter! And for goodness sakes, why oh why is Chris sleeping on the couch???????? lol Especially after his great Oscar worthy performance! XD
And I can just see David "stalking" Chris and going to every performance of the play! I look forward to the next chapter! And for goodness sakes, why oh why is Chris sleeping on the couch???????? lol Especially after his great Oscar worthy performance! XD
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September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far!! Chris and Dave are both amazing characters and think you have good job capturing the chemistry between them.
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September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. Keep going at it.
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September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ouw, only two more chapters? Is so hope you keep on writing with those two characters. I read the one with the dungeon, and this was intense. There is so much i want to know about Chris and David and what i would love to read about. So please....
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September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so sweet and sexy. I am glad that Chris stayed and talked with David. I am sure they both have some colorful histories to share with each other. I got very excited about the possible love scene with bondage. These two boys are seriously sexy. I can't wait to read more.