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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE IT!! IT ROCKS!! Great story idea too!! Keep up the awesome work, I'll be anxiously waiting for more!! Oh, and I just thought you might like to know Las is wearing a 'robe' not a 'rope' big difference! ;)
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Las...abandoned by his pack. Maybe he'll get back at them later? And the alpha seems pretty cool so far, but we shall see! Great work, keep it up!
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love wolf stories, and this one is interesting because there is also dogs. I'd like to know what exactly defines each kind differently, i'm curious! This first chapter was really good, there was only one or two times that I noticed something you wrote didn't make sense. It didn't really take away from the story, but it would be a good idea to have someone go over it or whatever for you!
I'm really interested in this story, so I hope you update again soon! :P
I'm really interested in this story, so I hope you update again soon! :P
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Like it so far ! Update soon please
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Liking it so far, update soon plz x
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea of this story so far, and I'm really looking forward to seeing what comes next. There are grammar mistakes here and there, on top of adding 'or something' to a few sentences (makes it sound unusual). But I''m not going to tell you how to write this, just telling you what I thought. It's a great start so far! Hope to see more soon, thanks.
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think I want to read the next chapter as soon as possible !!!
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wonderful.
but i want jealousy to merit the possessiveness.
but i want jealousy to merit the possessiveness.
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I really can't wait to see your world unfold. Is in a modern or medieval? What do they do for money? The wolf clan just by they way you explained seems to be better off then the dogs. Can't wait till your next update.
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The summary made me think this might not be very good but I tried it anyway and I really liked it. I would like to see this continue. Thanks!