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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Welll done! This was a very good chapter. I am really curious to know how you plan to let them have pups. Will it be MPreg or adoption? Either way works for me.
You grammar and spelling have improved this chapter. I would volunteer to beta, if I you haven't got one already. My email is in my profile.
You grammar and spelling have improved this chapter. I would volunteer to beta, if I you haven't got one already. My email is in my profile.
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, love this story
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so great!!! I absoloutly love the wolves!!!! I really want to know if they are shifters or something!!! I really think those two can be a wonderful couple when they overcome their differences!!! Hope to see you soon!!!!
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww this was sooo cute! I really hope you keep it this cute and that it doesn'T go angsty or something. Because loads of these great stories go angsty and then they're not nice anymore.
Hugs Aduial
Hugs Aduial
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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now of course something eventful must happen, conflict please lol.
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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter, the chase scene was hilarious! Though, Pen was being a jerk in the beginning, he deserved to headbutt a tree! Poor Las. Though, he seems to be fitting in rather well so far, and that's good! I can't wait for more! :D
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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I didn't believe that they group would be so accepting of Las. I'm glad~ The moments between Penellus and Las were also pretty awesome. Well, I can't do anything about your English but I wish you luck on finding a good beta. Thank you for the update!
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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice :)
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September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow I absoloutly love this story!!! I would be very happy if you continued both!!! I absoloutly love them both!!!! Though I must say that I like this one a little better!!! re they shapeshifters or werewolfes?? Or are they just called the wolves and dogs??? I really like your charas they are so sweet!!! I can't wait to see more of these storys!!!!! Hope to see you soon!!!!
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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. I don't usually read anthro too much, but with your question on your other story, I thought why not? Once again though, a beta would be very helpful.