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October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Keep going! I'm enjoying this story so very much! XD Las is so cute! XD I can't wait for them to mate! ;)
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. The last line confused me a little. If Penellus is the alpha of the pack and he is looking for a mate, and he chooses Las as his mate, why would there be a problem if a pup was born? Isnt making babies the whole purpose of choosing a mate?
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Quite a promising story you have here, I would like to beta it if you have not found one already. Please let me know.
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September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I love this story!! so cute and mysterious, I hope you update again soon!! For a while there I kept searching and it hadn't been updated but, now that it has been I am super excited to read more! Waiting patiently for your next update, take care till then!
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September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story too :) I hope you'll continue to update both.
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cutest chapter ever! I really want Penellus to propose to Las again so there can be mating! The story is going so nicely. I wonder who those blue eyes could belong to? I am looking forward to the next chapter. I love both of the stories you are working on.
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome updates!
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited to see this update. Who's watching them, can't wait to find out.
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September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It would be awesome if Penullus was the pregnant one, because it has been a while since I saw a strong seme/top with good fighting skills in such state.
By my heart,I do believe just the thought of it made me hard.
Good thing I am a girl and such things are hard to notice ROFL
By my heart,I do believe just the thought of it made me hard.
Good thing I am a girl and such things are hard to notice ROFL
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this concept is excellent :D
yes, you have spelling mistakes, but you're still doing fantastically well with the whole storyline, so definitely no complaints from me! i can't wait to read more
yes, you have spelling mistakes, but you're still doing fantastically well with the whole storyline, so definitely no complaints from me! i can't wait to read more