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for The Big Bad Wolf

by papuruakuma

schedule December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow amazing :) yummy Las
schedule December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, it's cute and has a charm about it that I haven't found all that often. I hope that you keep on going, because I know I'll keep on reading~
person mandy18m
schedule December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
One of the best story i ve read.:) i rly love it,so i want more:) I was wondering if this story will have Mpreg? (that would be rly interesting and cute:))
person kylee123
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Good job Pen! I think he should heavy on the seduction since Las is always going to be skittish. I am glad that Celio and Tan are getting along too.
schedule December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now THAT is a wolf pack lol
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Las is so cute! <3 and the one holding the injured dog, couldn't happen to be Celio? ;P hehe..
person kylee123
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The whole encounter with the tiger made me feel so sad for Las and Tan. As if they did not have enough problems. Maybe this will bring Tan and Celio closer. Celio is certainly feeling guilty. Las is so sweet. I am glad that Tan did not die. That would have caused a lot o terrible guilt for Las. Perhaps Pen will be able to help him to feel a little better after their big adventure. I hope to see an update to your other story too sometime. It is also very good.
person kylee123
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This relationship between Las and Pen is becoming so beautiful. I am very eager to see some smex though. I do love the way that they have become close. They are gentle and loving with each other. Maybe Tan and Celio might become friends too. Should be interesting. Pen's pack will soon become a mixed dog-wolf community.
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Las and Pen will make wonderful little ones. I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hehe cute chapter i like your update sorry for not getting to this faster but oh well i cant wait for your next update.