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May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story, good idea. There are a couple mistakes here and there, you might want to thing about getting a beta, or reading it over yourself awhile after you write it. But don't worry, they aren't too bad or too distracting. That, and we can't really blame you, since you said English wasn't your greatest, so I'm assuming it's not your first language. Or I might have read that wrong. And heck, it is mine, but sometimes I make the most stupidest mistakes. Either way, I love your story, and I really hope you update soon.
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April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay Las is preggers, good thing Pen's mommy is there lol.
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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YES!
All I can say is please god more! XDD
I love this story and, always get so happy when I see that you have updated!
Hope they keep coming! I'll be on the look out <3
Always~ Spicy~
All I can say is please god more! XDD
I love this story and, always get so happy when I see that you have updated!
Hope they keep coming! I'll be on the look out <3
Always~ Spicy~
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March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome new chapter. I love Pen's parents. I can't wait to read more.
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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice :) What's an Eskimo kiss?
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March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOHHHH! He's in trouble!
Update soon!
Update soon!
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March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what will happen now... Will Pen's parents like Lan or will they not? XD
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January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Please update soon!!!
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January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Hope Tan's dad makes it. Gren is such a bad alpha. Go Wolves!!
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December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! Let there be smex! I hope Las is ready to bite the bullet. I think it was very cute that Las got scared by almost losing Pen. After all, Pen has been remarkably patient and gentle with Las so far. He did not deserve to get the cold shoulder for thirteen days! I hope they will finally mate and become and official couple.