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for The Big Bad Wolf

by papuruakuma

person Love
schedule August 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me there will be more chapters!?!?! I want to read a chapter when las and pen finally have their kid!!
person Anon
schedule April 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Since this story is almost at an end, won't you just please give it an ending? It is frustrating to be left hanging, and it is a good story too. Could you just finish it already?
person katakan
schedule February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am sincerely hoping you can give us an ending to this wonderful story. I have been checking regularly for the ending chapter so I hope you can put me out of my misery....lol.... A doting and overprotective Pen is wonderful to see now that Lars is with child and I just want a happy ending for the family.
person afan
schedule October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is such a super adorable story, please update and give us a happy ending cos this story so much deserves it. Thank you for your awesome writing.
schedule October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i really am enjoying this story and i hope that there is more to come soon!!!
schedule April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yey!!! A new chapter; I had lost hope, and then forgot I was reading it, then yesterday a werewolf related story sparked my memory. Thank you for putting an effort in finishing this, I was one of those who wanted to read the end.
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. Not bad at all. It really didn't drag, and it kept me interested. Good job. Much love ~bye bye~
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The summary looked catchy, so I tried it.
and despite the English, well, needs a beta xD Typo's here and there, etc etc. And no space between the different scenes. (You can use line breaks or something?)
But overall, it was still nice to read~
I just wonder about the Mpreg factor in here. most mpreg authors would explain a bit, how it's possible. but well. what ever~

hope all goes well in the end. ;3

- nekoii
schedule March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Update soon I want to read more about Pen and Las(:
person amatista
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Me encanto la historia, la manada de pluma es genial, todos son tan unidos, aunque tiene sus excepciones -.- nada siempre es perfecto
Los padres de pluma son impresionantes y Alca ni que decir *0* simplemente soberbio
La familia aumenta es una gran alegría ^0^
Hola, espero que puedas continuar con la historia