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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is beautifully done! there are so many D/s storys out there, and sometimes so loveless, so your story was balm to my dark little soul :)
thats how it should be, conscious and loving and cared-for afterwards.
thanks a lot and i would looove to read more!
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thats how it should be, conscious and loving and cared-for afterwards.
thanks a lot and i would looove to read more!
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September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. Thank you. You give a wonderfully complete feeling to the context and characters.
I would love too hear more from both these characters.
I would love too hear more from both these characters.
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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank for this one-shot. It's good to read a BDSM story when I have the impression that the writer know about what he/she talk. Too much people write this kind of story when they just don't know the base (like safe-word, stupid ignorant people mouhaha!), it's tiring.
That the sex part was not the main topic but that it's was more the psychologies of the personage make me appreciate more this story. BDSM it's about psychologies.
The part when they switch (when David become sub) was a little predictable. Maybe it's because I'm more a sub myself that I see this one coming, don't know loll.
I enjoy reading the inner through of David and the relationship he has with Chris.
An other point that I like it's they have not 21years.
You make me ask myself a lot of questions about their past, make me want answers. So, I vote for the prequel.
Please....!!! They're really intriguing.
In the end, I think that you can see that I like everything loll.
Gwen.
That the sex part was not the main topic but that it's was more the psychologies of the personage make me appreciate more this story. BDSM it's about psychologies.
The part when they switch (when David become sub) was a little predictable. Maybe it's because I'm more a sub myself that I see this one coming, don't know loll.
I enjoy reading the inner through of David and the relationship he has with Chris.
An other point that I like it's they have not 21years.
You make me ask myself a lot of questions about their past, make me want answers. So, I vote for the prequel.
Please....!!! They're really intriguing.
In the end, I think that you can see that I like everything loll.
Gwen.
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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I didn't expect to find the lovely David and Chris here on AFF but it was a wonderful surprise. I've loved every step of their journey (and hope I haven't missed anything new these last months, must check LJ asap!) but this, gods!, this was intense and great, and full of love and interesting backstory so I couldn't ask for more. I've always been intrigued by the Scene, but most fics that delve in S&M and sadomaso themes are disapointing and rather crass while here it's done tastefully and with just the right dose of expertise to keep it interesting and not documental.
It'd be great to see the story posted here, if just for the excuse to read it all over again ^-^ .
It'd be great to see the story posted here, if just for the excuse to read it all over again ^-^ .