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for The Promise and the Threat

by sorrowfall

person smint45
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was painful!!! but I'm so happy that they are alright!!!! Thank you so much for this wonderful chappy!!!! See you next time!!!
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
God, this was so good! The story is so freakin' good, I just realized it hasn't had any sex in it! It's amazing! I've been at the edge of my stool (my computer is on my kitchen counter and I use a stool), for the whole ride! What a brave girl Reiko is; there aren't many 16 yr olds, especially girls, who would risk their life going after a bunch of murderers! Great story; too bad Fujimara (is that right?) got away.
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
God this is so good! I hate these cliffies tho! Hopefully Ichi can get the shipment together; Fuji(can't remember his name, sorry) won't hurt Akira too badly; he's using him as collateral. And hopefully, he won't go back on his word and harm him worse even when he gets the shipment back. Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Boy, I review and go back to the main page, and lo and behold, you must have updated while I was reviewing! Great chapter, Reiko is crazy; I hope she doesn't get hurt. I hope she doesn't get her or Ruka hurt while they wait for Jiro. God, this is sooooo good!
person smint45
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This really is bad!!! They are only get hurt more when they go on like this!!!! I really hope Ruka and Reiko will be ok!!! And that Jiro will come in time to rescue them!!!! Hope they will be alright and able to rescue Akira!!! Thank you for the update!!!! See you!!!
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Shit! How can you leave it like that?! How is Jiro gonna find Akira? OMG, what a cliffie!!!! I HATE cliffies!!!!! But...such an exciting sequel!!! I was in tears when they brought Suke in all hurt and bloody. Thank God he'll be ok; he better be; he has people to kill now!
person smint45
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really don't like where this is going!!!! But well it has to get worse to get better ne?? Well anyway it was quite strange seeing Suke with a panic attac!!!! I really want to see what happens next!!!! Thank you for the fast update!!!! See you!!!!
person smint45
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!! Well great is probably not the right wort, it was terrible would fit better!!!! That does not mean you chappie was bad, I only mean poor Suke!!!!!!!!!!! But I must say i happy he is still alive!!!! And I really want to know what happend to mak him cry and be so broken both pysically and mentally!!!! Hope you explain in the next chappie!!!! See you!!!
person smint45
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you found the time to post the next part so soon!!! Thanks a lot!!!! But I really don't think I want to know what happend!!! But well I will see next chappie anyway!!! i just hope that Suke is still alive and not to badly hurt!!!! Thanks again and see you!!!
person kylee123
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh No! I am so worried about Daisuke. I wish I could take Reiko's place snuggling with two hot guys on the floor. Nice start to this new story.