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for The Promise and the Threat

by sorrowfall

schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jsut finished ch. 13; really, really good! I'm glad they both like the "new" apartment. Yeah, redecorating can make it seem as if they moved into a new place. And now it feels like both of their's. I was also cracking up when they were in "dispose" in the bathroom! I would be exactly like Suke, totally embarrassed and humiliated! I'd wanna crawl under a rock and disappear! Ruka is great; he could care less what people thought! I wish I could be more like him. Really good chapter. I guess Fuji is coming soon; all good things must come to an end, right?
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, the rings made me cry. That was so sweet, especially what was engraved in them. And poor Ruka, always being so insecure, always thinking the worst. I'm glad Suke has a sort of sixth sense and can tell something's wrong. He should definitely start carrying his knives around from now on!
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, where have I been? I just noticed you posted a bunch of chapters! In regards to ch. 16, which I just finished, what a great chapter! It was so emotional; had me in tears! I'm so glad Ruka talked w/Sono and Sono told him it might be b/c of Suke's scars and his body. Thank God Suke admitted just that. But what's up w/Sono being angry w/Ruka? He's not jealous is he? Wasn't he the one who broke it off w/Ruka?
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I fucked up. The chapter was 10, not 16. I don't know where I got 16 from. You probably don't even have 16 chapters yet! Hahaha Sorry
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Now Fugimaru (sorry, I forgot how to spell that fucker's name) knows where Suke is. He's gonna strike when they least expect it.

It's so weird reading about breakfast being rice and miso soup (one of my favorites!) But not for breakfast! Why don't they eat cereal, or pancakes, or waffles? Just curious. There are a few other Japanese stories on here and they also have rice and soup for breakfast.
person smint45
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
They really need to talk with eachother!!!! It's kind of annoying that they always missunderstand eachother!!!! I hope that will get better!!! And the driving in the end was really fun!!! I really want to see if Suke will pass out or not!!! Or if he will ever enter a car together with Ruka when they are finished!!!!Thanks for two chappies!!! See you!!!
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Suke having nightmares his first night back. Hopefully Ruka will help him heal quicker. I liked the Akira/Reiko scenes. They are finally beginning to express themselves. I hope everything works out for them and their friendship won't be ruined. Great chapter, looking forward to the next! And where the hell has Fujimora (or whatever the fuck his name is) hiding? B/C you know, sooner or later, he will show up to wreck havoc again!
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, they're not gonna crash are they? I don't think Suke's body could take much more damage. And during the chapter, it was so sad how they were both feeling nervous and anxious, both thinking they did something wrong. Suke should just tell Ruka about his self-consciousness from his bruises. Ruka won't care. Doesn't he know that? It was a really good chapter, I just hope they didn't crash!
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank God they're all gonna be ok. But, they still have to be careful; Fujimaru (is that spelled right?) is still out there and he's gonna seek revenge - again.
person smint45
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful!!! Thnks for the slight smutt!!! Was a really nice change after all the pain!!!! I really liked this chappie although it seemed a bit like the calm before the storm!!!! Hope the storm isn't coming too soon cause I need a slight rest after the last chappies!!!! Well anyway i love this story!!! Thank you for the fast updates!!!! See you soon!!!