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I can't believe you just left it like that!!!!! OMFG!!!!!! Did Fujimaru grab Daisuike's knife? Shit! How are Fuji and Masa and the rest of the racers gonna help them???? OMG, you better hurry up w/an update!!!! I will be waiting by the computer, NOT VERY PATIENTLY, I might add!!!!! Oh, and btw: I was confused about the pictures Fujimaru said of Daisuike and his brother? Akira? Jiro? Who? What did he mean?

Fuck, where have I been? You updated TWO chapters and I didn't even know it!! This last one, Taken, was, wow. That's all I can say! I'm at the edge of my seat, my heart's beating a mile a minute hoping Suke can save Ruka w/o getting them both killed.

Ok, gotta read the next chapter!

Oh fuck! I thought this chapter would be the end of Fujimaru! Shit, now I gotta wait w/pins and needles, waiting for your next update! Shit, I'm so anxious for Ruka and Suke! That is so not fair that Suke has to give up his only weapons, while that fucktard can use all his? How the HELL is Suke gonna get out of this mess?

OMG, my heart just fell to my stomach. Fujimaru just kidnapped Ruka, didn't he? Oh shit, this isn't gonna be good. And Daisuke and Ruka can barely move, let alone fight back!

Thank you Aya for the explanation! I knew I read that chapter before! These last few chapters were nailbiting! I was at the edge of my seat reading them, from the misunderstanding in the kitchen, to that fucktard trying to hit on Suke, to the crash. Amazing chapters!

I gotta say: Ruka and Suke really need to tell each other what they're thinking. They were both so paranoid and anxious and upset over nothing! Why couldn't Suke just admit he's still in pain, for goodness sakes?????? That would have saved them both anxiety. Why couldn't Ruka TALK to him and ask him why he wasn't truthful with him when he asked what was wrong? They really need to learn how to communicate w/each other. Ok, I can kinda understand Suke; he's never been in a relationship before, but there's no excuse for Ruka.

Anyway, great chapters! I'm really on edge tho, just waiting for Fujimaru to drop that ball. (why does Suke think Fujimaru is dead?)

Didn't you post this last chapter a week or so ago? I know I read it before.

I am catching up with the story. I am really loving it so far. I love Daisuke and Ruka. Please keep up the good writing.

Ohh, I don't like the sound of "a bang in the kitchen". I'm still at the edge of my seat, expecting Fujimaru to pop in and scare the shit out of Ruka and Suke.

But the sex toys were really cute! Interesting that there are so many toys...... lol

Shit! Fujimaru (I'm sorry, I always screw up his spelling!) found them and is watching them! They're so gonna be off guard when he finally catches them.

My heart was in my stomach just reading about the race. Actually, that first red car that went out of control and almost crashed into Ruka's car; I thought HE was one of Fujimaru's guys! But yeah, I could never go for a racer; I'd have too many ulcers!

Yay, you updated! Don't Suke and Ruka realize that Fujimaru (I know, I know, spelled wrong again!) is alive and kicking? Wouldn't they think he'd go after them? I know Suke had a feeling they were being watched, but come on, coming from his family and job, you would think he'd realize it's the Fuji guy!


I thought the rings were beautiful. I was ready to smack Ruka upside the head; he's so insecure! I don't know if I reviewed that chapter.

Anyway, great update! Looking forward to reading about the race: Ruka better be careful!!!!!