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This is horrifyingly creepy and terrible and dark and sad. I'm shuddering. It's like going back into the middle ages- women (child-bearers) are disciplined and controlled and sold, and it's a terrible betrayal of human rights and emotions. Your writing style is wonderful (thanks for the correct grammar/usage/spelling), but I won't be back to read this. I just hope that Ivan ends up happy, under his control, and Malcolm turns back to nice.

OMG!!! All the time, I along with Malcolm thought that was what the men at the manor wanted from their carriers! Whoo...my god. So now Malcolm is a threat to himself and Ivan...huh. And he was much better to Ivan in the beginning of the relationship before he met those guys at the manor. Something is not right here...*worries*

I sure did not see this comming. I don't even know what to think about it.

But I always love these chapters :3

I love your stories and I hope miller gets his and wouldn't it be good if Ivan were pregnant but not miller he should not get to be pregnant at least not yet, oh yeah and what if Ivan had the first little girl born since the virus as it is the male of the speaces that decides the sex of a child and not the female I am surprised it already happened.

poor Ivan-so not fair when he was trying-thanks for the update!

So, I'd taken to reading your stories from a clinical perspective; it allowed me to keep up without the flaming rage and disgust I'm usually overcome with at the society they function in. However, Ivan is just screwed up enough to warrant a review. Awesome.

I really wish he'd been able to seriously HURT Miller. I'm not going to pretend I LIKE Ivan, or claim he's a just man, but I'm not an ogre lacking in all sympathy. Ivan's fucked up; he has anger, commitment, and inferiority issues, to name a few. His impotent rage paralyzes him as he recognizes his own inability to interact in social situations, particularly because he can no longer simply assert himself as a dominant power and demand compliance. He's messed up and doesn't want to talk about it, but he's made progress and is trying. His resistance of the streak of cruelty in him is proof of that.

Miller is shameful. He's a carnivorous plant, luring you in with a pretty display before feasting upon your demise. /the baiting and taunting of Ivan went far beyond catty into needlessly cruel and detestable. He sincerely made me ill with his final comments as I realized precisely how hateful he was. His words are poison and I hope Ivan chokes him with the belt Malcolm just used when he finally shatters.

I kind of hope Ivan kills some people and then himself(or not, he may take his chances in the woods), but that's how many of your adventures make me feel at some point. XD
Nacht

I don’t usually take it this far, but I can honestly say I hate Miller. He deserved everything Ivan gave him. Maybe more. I’m a little afraid he’s pregnant and that the baby was injured. But if he was pregnant, he only has himself to blame. He pushed on a person he knew had violent tendencies until that person snapped. It’s beyond stupid. He really only has himself to blame.
Lords. I feel so sorry for Ivan. This is so unfair. Anyone would have snapped at the vomit Miller puked out, and then Ivan got beaten for it. It just shows how really powerless the carries are. Malcom punished Ivan like a slave, all the while humiliating him. The love I felt for Malcom has been seriously injured. He showed his loyalty to the wrong side. He can’t be trusted anymore.
My heart always breaks for Ivan. His life has sucked so much. I know he’s done a whole lot of really bad things too, but he is trying to change. Miller sure knows how to make Ivan feel welcome and loved. Maybe, just Maybe, this will make Miller stop his vomit throwing on Ivan. Maybe he’ll be to scared to get beaten. On the other hand, there are so many ways of hurting someone without facing them. Lords. It doesn’t look like Ivan is going to be happy, is it…

This is my first time reading this story (thus, the universe you've created) and I'm glad I did. I've not seen Mpreg written this way and following the treatment of the carriers (which is disturbing, to say the least!) and Ivan's mental state and how the donors react. It's all a little barbaric and significantly more primal. My hackles always rise when the donors talk amongst each other about structure, discipline, and power exchange (or rather, there being a distinct lack thereof) with the carriers. It's interesting to ponder how much could potentially change if human life started declining rapidly.

On the last chapter specifically, I would have cut a bitch with Miller. No joke. I hope Ivan made that rebellion worth it. There's nothing more tragic than a parent, someone meant to protect and nurture, destroying a child in the way Ivan was. For another adult to target and prey on those memories is even more despicable.

You stopped that chapter at a perfect and defining moment. Will Ivan say anything about what Miller said? Would it make a difference if he did? How will Ivan change now that Malcom used physical force (more so, before getting Ivan's side of the story)? Will Ivan completely close himself off? Who in the seven hells has been running his mouth about Ivan's past?
What precarious circumstances you've managed to unfold. Fantastic job!
Needless to say, I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter. =) Good luck!

ugh, I'd hurt Miller too the little bitch.... Ivan is no saint, I have a hard time accepting any of the "manor's" BS. But Ivan didn't ruin that party, Miller did. Ugh... corporal punishment : / what a sad world the carriers exist in.

Nothing is as enjoyable as reading Ivan Kosin! My favorite. :D

How the hell does Miller know about Ivan?!!! If I were Ivan, I couldn't bear it as well!

People can be very very cruel especially when you are hurt and sensitive! :( I don't know how can Ivan live between them anymore??? except may be he would retreat to himself ... hmmm ... telling him that no one likes him ... and while he was trying ... he might stop trying all together, especially with Mal not considering his state! I mean he was very patient with Ivan before but this time he didn't ask why?! he didn't consider that maybe it wasn't Ivan's fault but Miller's!

I guess there is a big possibility that if no one hugs him tonight, he will lose it all. but well, you are the author, you know what's gonna happen and really I can't wait to read more! It's 2:30 in morning here in Canada that I'm writing these thoughts :p you can tell how much I love Ivon! ^_^

Please update soon ;) and thanks for updating this perfect chapter! I just love the way you play with your characters personalities, their psychological state and what goes on deep inside! you are just great ;)