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Great job <3

:< i feel kinda bad for them both.
What's up with all this cults? D: it's horrible. >n<
But it is viable, considering that after the fact people think they know the best way.

I wonder if there were any cults like this in the 1950's and earlier?

Wow, Miller went through the initiation and ritual too? His character sounds really interesting.

I have to say I'm a little on the fence of the last two chapters of Ivan Kosin :/ I'm a very big fan of this story and would hate to see it end because there is just so much that needs to be covered, but the twist in the story that I'm guessing is that its actually one of the compounds that are affiliated with those of August, remember Ivan!! Where they make their carriers, just as they had made Miller because he was not worthy enough, and I think I read in August that they thought it was acceptable if two carriers were together. I know you have something up your sleeve Kabi lol, what it is I don't know. Its going to be interesting what will happen when Ivan meets the "newly improved" Malcolm; but I'm scared because I like Ivan so much! I don't mind if he is roughed up a little because that's what makes this story so heart stopping. I love that Ivan still wont get close to Miller and snatches his arm away when Miller touches him, it does seem that Miller might have more of an interest in Ivan than we had previously thought. So keep up the good work, and update ^^

GAH! So many cliff-hangers!! I want to know what happens but I don't want it to end either!!

I'm a bit confused too, but I guess they want like... ultra conformity by breaking the bother of them down. weird. interesting, but weird.
please right more! 8D

oh, I'm happy that you continued this story. I would really like Ivan's reaction toward Malcolm when he come back and if Malcom will change or not.I really sympathize with Malcom, and I hope at least they will be okay.

great

Whao................. What?

Is this manor, like, another whole cult? What's with these cult's man? O_O

I'm beginning to... have difficulty... understanding... what the heck is going on with the psychology system of the 'men' in the 'manor'... And what they heck was that Miller on about? What, did he do what he did deliberately? So that Ivan could 'become one of us' ?

Lost lost. Lost is lost. I is lost. Gods... *headwall*

Uh... I guess I'll just keep reading and hope things clear up a bit...? Yeah~


- nekoii

Oh wow, this is turning into some creepy cult status...what, do the men go around sharing the carriers or something? Lol, that was just a thought. =)