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Ivan is pregnant. Am I right?

The old man was Ivan's father right? So Ivan is safe and that is what makes him mostly healed? Or is it that he now accepts his "fate" as a carrier and at commune? house he feels support?
love your writing

woah. you have me /almost/kinda/sorta/actually believing in this happy ending lol.... you and your mind games Kabi. Congrats on finishing this segment!!

I hadn't been to this site in a while so I was happy to see so many of your fics updated so thanks for that and glad Malcom was released :)

This place where they're staying scare me. And I feel like I'm still waiting for Ivan to be happy. Also, I kind of whant them to move ;P Sure, it's nice that this place is good in putting responsibility on the "man"-man, the dominant, but no place dealing with torture is good. And they feel very manipulative too. Ergo - Avernion frightened. So, through this badly spelled review, I just wanted to thank you for a new chapter :3

Is it just me or does Malcolm seem a tad bit eerie. Gaah!!

The ending didn't surprise me because it was already clear that Malcolm would return to Ivan. Still, I was a bit disappointed because it was so sketchy, with the feeling that you just wanted to get it over and done with. After such a long series, I can understand that, from a writer's point of view. As a reader, not so much. But thanks, not just for Ivan Kosin, but for the whole series. It was a wonderful trip.

.......... okay............

that was something. hmmm... something.... odd.... very.... very.... dream like. despite it being real time. there was a dream like feel about the recent chapters.
this can't be the end right? somehow i feel like there's not gonna be any closure until Ivan's father dies. and what ever odd cult thing this 'manor' has going on... is still... mysterious...
or maybe that's your intention. to leave the skeletons hidden in their closets, never to be disclosed to the readers...? something like that?
and Ivan is .... Ivan still feels, not right. Malcom got 'fixed' perhaps, but what about Ivan then?

hmmmmmmmmmmm~~~ well~...
who knows~ *shrugs*

-nekoii

Oh, what a creepy (but great!) chapter. I don't know that I completely understand this cult (I'm going to keep calling it a cult, it just qualifies as one for me), and I can't say that they're all bad (some of their "Rules", like not hitting your carrier, seem "good"). However, it still feels so sad that now Ivan and Malcolm are reunited and Malcolm came back a different person. I keep thinking they're getting closer to a connection and then they break apart again (although Ivan has definitely started to have feelings for him it seems). I loved this line though "They were tied up in it together, two serpents with tangled tails, bound together by the irreversibility of their bond.". Malcolm's little dream state is so weird and interesting.

I don't know if this is the end (it's not marked complete, but you're naming the chapter "after") and I feel it's kind of a sad (but good, don't get me wrong) ending. If it is the end, just wanted to say thank you for writing this lovely and interesting story.

Can't wait for more Kabi!! >.< Ivan is my ultimate favorite and I feel so bad because Malcolm, I mean the "real" Malcolm would have been better than this newly improved guy whose brainwashed. I feel sorry for him because now I'm not so sure if Malcolm wants to 'love' Ivan for him or just because he is a carrier and their "god" wants them to.