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October 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM
I have absolutely no sympathy for Ivan.
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December 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME story, going straight into my favorites cache! Don't ever stop writing please.
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December 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow oh wow, that line got me smiling each time i read it
"Yeah." he said, "It was a bear."
Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa. I think i'm a bit obesses with all your stories...yep.
"Yeah." he said, "It was a bear."
Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa. I think i'm a bit obesses with all your stories...yep.
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe its over. (Is it?)
The ending was so vague but it made me happy that Ivan, the jerk who I hated since he first made an appearance, and hurt Caddy has a "happy" ending.
I want to know more about this occult, and I know you love giving us more questions than answers. :)
You have a really odd way with words, like its from an observers point of view, or a science journal. Hard to describe.
Please keep going with this wonderful universe of yours. :)
The ending was so vague but it made me happy that Ivan, the jerk who I hated since he first made an appearance, and hurt Caddy has a "happy" ending.
I want to know more about this occult, and I know you love giving us more questions than answers. :)
You have a really odd way with words, like its from an observers point of view, or a science journal. Hard to describe.
Please keep going with this wonderful universe of yours. :)
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March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo. It can't be over... it just can't be!
;n; I need more of this universe. Whenever you update it feels like christmas.
Can't we have a few more chapters? :) *peer pressure*
;n; I need more of this universe. Whenever you update it feels like christmas.
Can't we have a few more chapters? :) *peer pressure*
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March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Somehow the ending was like... bitter sweet, but i <3 it anyway x3
I love reading your stories.
Now I'm excited about Mikael 83
If you ever published any of these, I would by them and read them all again (for the third time). :3
Keep up the good work! :D
I love reading your stories.
Now I'm excited about Mikael 83
If you ever published any of these, I would by them and read them all again (for the third time). :3
Keep up the good work! :D
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March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww and here I thought it was another chapter.
But it's the end.
Just like with Ghali's story. the end feels a bit too soon. just a bit.
You end it soon enough to leave your reader's mind's still thinking about your stories long after they're over.
but you end it suitably so.
I feel sad, but it's good. I just wished my mind stopped thinking about them! Ivan and Ghali STILL enters my thoughts every now and then. then......... well, don't need to hear my mind's rants.
Anyway, good going Kabi.
When I first found your stories. the paragraphing reeaaaaly put me off. Because, the only other stories I've read with paragraphing like yours were all mediocre.
Yours isn't mediocre at all. Not saying that it is fantastic. I mean, there are many authors out there with fantastic grammar and vocabulary that brings everything alive with such vividness. I don't think you're that sort.
but you're a sort of your own. I can't put a finger to it but... You bring reality into your stories.
The tales behind these entire 'carrier' scenario and world, is scarily akin to real life now. All you have to do is replace the so called 'carriers' with woman and you have the gray secrets of the world.
THAT is what makes you, a sort of your own.
Well, hope to read more from you ;)
I wish you well in life~
- nekoii
But it's the end.
Just like with Ghali's story. the end feels a bit too soon. just a bit.
You end it soon enough to leave your reader's mind's still thinking about your stories long after they're over.
but you end it suitably so.
I feel sad, but it's good. I just wished my mind stopped thinking about them! Ivan and Ghali STILL enters my thoughts every now and then. then......... well, don't need to hear my mind's rants.
Anyway, good going Kabi.
When I first found your stories. the paragraphing reeaaaaly put me off. Because, the only other stories I've read with paragraphing like yours were all mediocre.
Yours isn't mediocre at all. Not saying that it is fantastic. I mean, there are many authors out there with fantastic grammar and vocabulary that brings everything alive with such vividness. I don't think you're that sort.
but you're a sort of your own. I can't put a finger to it but... You bring reality into your stories.
The tales behind these entire 'carrier' scenario and world, is scarily akin to real life now. All you have to do is replace the so called 'carriers' with woman and you have the gray secrets of the world.
THAT is what makes you, a sort of your own.
Well, hope to read more from you ;)
I wish you well in life~
- nekoii
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March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ivan's pregnant? And his dad is dead? Wow. Can't wait for the next chappy!
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March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yaay, we get one more chapter!
A bear got him... yeah right.
Just the right mix of happily and creepily ever after. On one hand, it seems like Ivan has been bad for Malcolm, who started out this upstanding, innocent young guy. Now he's this semi-disturbed, dark figure who's capable of murdering someone in cold blood and smiling after. But after the whole story, it's hard not to be happy for both characters (the old man had it coming, and aww they finally are having a child, and aww Ivan has friends).
"Malcolm grinned fondly down at his mate, his carrier, his husband, his sweet and irreplaceable and mostly-healed Ivan."
Perfect ending.
A bear got him... yeah right.
Just the right mix of happily and creepily ever after. On one hand, it seems like Ivan has been bad for Malcolm, who started out this upstanding, innocent young guy. Now he's this semi-disturbed, dark figure who's capable of murdering someone in cold blood and smiling after. But after the whole story, it's hard not to be happy for both characters (the old man had it coming, and aww they finally are having a child, and aww Ivan has friends).
"Malcolm grinned fondly down at his mate, his carrier, his husband, his sweet and irreplaceable and mostly-healed Ivan."
Perfect ending.
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March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You have a really cryptic way of telling things.
Like how they had actually murdered Ivan's father, so called 'found his body after the bear attack' and nicely buried it.
Like how Ivan's now pregnant.
Like how everything I'm assuming could just be a load of rubbish that my brain managed to cook up thanks to your cryptic-ness~
But you know what...
I really love your stories anyway, weird spacings and all.
Tell us more yeah ^___^
- nekoii
Like how they had actually murdered Ivan's father, so called 'found his body after the bear attack' and nicely buried it.
Like how Ivan's now pregnant.
Like how everything I'm assuming could just be a load of rubbish that my brain managed to cook up thanks to your cryptic-ness~
But you know what...
I really love your stories anyway, weird spacings and all.
Tell us more yeah ^___^
- nekoii