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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Shiloh is both a boys and girls name. Hope to see more of him too! ^_^
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September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so great!!!! So we learn a few things about the charas and their powers!!!!1 Very interesting !!!! I can't wait for more!!!! See you!!!!
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September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, wow even hurt Huxley is strong. It seems everyone at the carnival has a story to tell. Eric is really protective of Zachery, does he have feelings for him?
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September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GREAT chapter! I like Colin and Aline and Chloe and Argus. Zach is pretty weird for me; so he was "normal" before he got his tattoos? Hmmmmm. I like Huxley and Weston, feel sorry for them both. I hope Weston can pull Huxley out of whatever he's hiding from.
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It is good. Very good. I love your stories. You are very good at portraying those unusual types. Very creative. So please write some more. I am also dying for more of Shades of Gray. Is Moira the same as or just a similar sea creature to Jin.
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start. Well written and really draws you in, can't wait to see what you have in mind for this story. Keep up the good work, look forward to reading more.
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was an absolout fantastic start!!!! Can't wait for more!!! The charas are really interesting so far!!!! See you soon!!!
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are fucking amazing! I saw this towards the end of the page and clicked on it ONLY BECAUSE YOU WROTE IT and then you already updated to chapter 2 AS I WAS READING THE BEGINNING!!!!!! That is so fucking weird! Anway, gonna read the story now; I am SURE it'll be awesome!!!!! Like everything you write!
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was absoloutly fantastic!!!! I love tthis story!!!! As for new charas I love the vampire!!! Now lets see what charas can be added?? Elves would be nice, or Naga, or dragons who can take on a human form, or incubbi, or unichorns would all be great!!! I can't think of anymore at the moment but I will tell you if something comes up my mind!!!!! See you next time!!!!
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! That nightmare freaked me out! Well, vampire stories are not usually my thing; I usually like things in modern day, normal people stories. But, with that being said, this is a really good story and I may be changing my mind. So, is Zachary (my kid's name) a vampire also? And then is Huxley since they're brothers? The Weston kid seems so normal, it's amazing he saw the end of the world? By demons and monsters? Creepy. Heheheh, I think the twins would be a great addition to the Carnival! lol Hey, there's a freak show you were looking for! The creepy twins doing what they do best!!!! lol