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Hi again. This is tied with Coming of Age for second place This story is great so I hope you will keep working on it too. It looks as if the action is just about to begin for this adventure. I love all the characters and I love the romance between Huxley and Weston. I hope Zachary and Shiloh figure things out. So I hope you will continue with Carnival too. I am sure that I will enjoy whichever story you choose to work on at the moment. Go with whatever you feel inspired to write.

Excellent! I love it, the characters are wonderful :)

There is so much going on in this story. I find that most AFF authors do poorly when they try to focus on this many characters, but this is not the case here. Your story feels really natural. I'm not finding it hard to keep characters straight like I might if another author tried to do this. I love Huxley and Weston. I also love Shiloh, but i want to know more about him being a whore. What's that about? Zachery is the most annoying of the characters to me. He seems a bit immature. I'm waiting for him to throw a temper tantrum any minute now. Despite my dislike of him as an individual, I'd love to see more between him and Shiloh. It's funny that Zachary sees Shiloh as being young, but I see Shiloh as more mature than him. Anyway, great chapters...and two in one day. It's like double coupon day!

Huxley and Weston are so cute together - Boy's Love Heaven for me! There is nothing I love more than the blushing innocent first time love moments. Also I love Zachary but I really want to beat him over the head with my purse. How dare he call Shiloh a whore when it seems like Zachary is sleeping with quite a few people too. He made sweet Shiloh cry too. Such a heartless meanie!

These were wonderfull!!!! I'm so happy you took my idea with dragon turning into human!!!! Thanks!!!! I absoloutly love the fox hybrid and i hope Zach will get over his shadow and tell him of his feelings!!!1 He really needs someone now that huxly is in love!!!!! I also want to know more about why the snakes are poisoning him!!!! I hope to see you soon!!!!

I think Shiloh can be either a girl's name or a boy's. Shiloh is the name of Brangelina's little girl; it is also the name of a male dog in the Shiloh and Saving Shiloh kid's books and movies.

I'm really getting into this story and it surprises me b/c I usually don't read anything other than "normal" stuff. No vampires, dragons, whatever else is written about that's not "normal". But...your characters I am really liking and your writing is wonderful. I really like Huxley and Weston; I think it's good that Weston is opening up to someone in such a positive way. I also like Jericho and Shiloh. I'm on the fence w/Zach; I like that he's protective of his brother, as he should be, but what did he do to Shiloh? Why does he hate to look at Shiloh? It should be the other way around. Oh, also, I was kinda creeped out when Zach's snakes started slithering out of his body and into the grass on his walk-a-out. Really creepy!

But, I do love this story!

Wow what a lot of updates! Thanks for all the great chapters. Love all the characters & their individual stories. Zachery sure has a lot against Shiolo(?sp) but the young fox is in his thoughts & dreams a lot. If he doesn't get past his cold blooded ways he's going to loose something that really is important to him it seems. That is really interesting also, the carnival has a brothel? Want wait to see where you go with this. Keep up the good work.

littleolmee

If I was a freak, I would probably have camoflage skin. Like skin that would change colors with the background. Or I would have xray vision, which I suppose is more of a super power, but it would be a lot of fun. Or I might have an extra set of arms. That would be fun because I could maybe multitask more. And think of all the fun of getting smexy with someone who has an extra set of hands. That'd be hot. People could call me spider woman. In which case, maybe I should have two extra sets of arms. Ummm...I love this story.

I am so happy to see Weston and Huxley getting closer and closer. I hope they will be happy together and I hope the world is not coming to an end. if it is coming to an end, then Zachary better find Shiloh and talk to him ASAP. I am already in love with Shiloh. I fell in love when his ears flattened and he hissed at Zachary. So cute. I am so sad that he was in love with Zachary all this time. I cant wait to read the next chapter for this story.