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April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1. This chapter really drew me into the world of Carnival with the mysterious and erotic characters that were portrayed. The depth of your descriptions of each character shimmered into life with details. Really enthralling and you've got yourself a fan. :3
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April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2. Besides the sex, hot and mind numbing that it was, the way you incorporated their interaction with each other and the process of it was stunningly and beautifully done. I would've chopped the story up all wrong if I did it. And the way you ended the chapter was so unexpected, I was strangely satisfied. X3 Some writers usually end with just the character sleeping or sleeping with a long dream. You left me with thoughts on whether he was seeing a part of what his brother did.
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April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3. Wow. -claps enthusiastically- I feel like I'm watching a movie and not really reading a story, even though I am. Beautifully done and I like your winged character and how you smoothly added him to the end of the chapter.
Your description of Tia and how she in all her three hundred pound glory floated and turned in circles was cute and adorably funny at the same time.
Your description of Tia and how she in all her three hundred pound glory floated and turned in circles was cute and adorably funny at the same time.
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April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4. I love Rahda. Her silver tongue and quick wit is refreshing against Zachary's hot temper. Hmm~ -smacks lips- Huxley and Weston, I'm looking forward to this combination. Again, you've written another wonderfully scrumptious chapter.
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April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5. Woo~ Definitely smoothing out with heated confrontations and denial of sexual frustration. Poor Shiloh though with Zachary and I can see Jericho, if I spelled his name correctly, taking over Zachary's position since he so kindly worded that he didn't want anything to do with the foxy boy.
With a whole troupe together, I wonder how Hux and Wes will consummate their affections for each other. And if Zach will find his answers in the envelope or will he have another session of resist Alecis before giving in.
With a whole troupe together, I wonder how Hux and Wes will consummate their affections for each other. And if Zach will find his answers in the envelope or will he have another session of resist Alecis before giving in.
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April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
-hugs- I'm glad that you're doing better and I hope for you to continue with Carnival. While I'm waiting, I'll be going over the rest of your stories that you have posted. <33
Take care and be well.
Take care and be well.
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September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear you've had some tough times here lately, I hope you find things better soon. As far as your question personally I really love this story, it's very interesting & has some great characters. Take care & hang in there.
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September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absoloutly love this story and would be very happy if you could continue Carnival!!! At the moment I don't have enough time to look into you otherstory so I can only coment on this one!!!! Keep up the great work and I hope you life is going up again!!!
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September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey i really hope you continue this story i am also reading shades of gray and i hope your life gets more bearable soon.
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September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
post this please!!!!!!!!!!!!!