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Probably one of the best well written stories I've read, be it on this site or anywhere else for that matter!
I couldn't stop reading it from the first word, and I can't wait for more!

the big bad d'jnn? j'inn? (i can't recall how to spell the title of the bartender demon guy ^^;) was really creepy... I have to say I'm nervous that our Demon King is nervous too!! : ( but is that just because he isn't back to full capacity so he's "weak" right now? Or is the bartender more powerful than him even on a normal day?? I hope that the King, Leon and the Alchemist grow close to one another. :)

I love LOVE LOVE this storie its soooo hot!! and so crazy with its aggresstive characters!! you have created genius!!*i think so anyway*
I can't wait to see wats next!!! I see so many possiblies with these guys.

poo, I don't like him sleeping with anyone other than Zastin....is he really going to be taken a lot?? Will he fall in love with the demon king??? How come Zastin didn't stop those demons...I was totally waiting for him to barge in and be like 'he's mine, hands off'. Did hhe do it on purpose so they could cure Leon...but why didn't he stop them before they slept with him?? And how is the alchemist going to play into all of this is he going to become a lover in their threesome....??? I dunno, I think it would be better if Zastin protected him from the other demons...then Leon would be able to fall in love with him a lot easier....and to cure his 'heat' he could sleep with him himself even if he can't produce a child yet...but I leave it up to you as your writing is very well done, and I'll stay tuned to see what happens.

too wierd...but w as a good chapter...I HOPE YOU CONTINUE

Okay this sounds way to interesting and exciting and I can't wait for what happens next I mean how could a kid from this century save a kid from a thousand years ago especially from demons who want to impregnate said kid wow great imagination. I can't wait to find out please continue you have geared up my own imagination thank you.

pls upload more

This is an absoloutly fantastic beginning!!! I really love this story!!!! But everything is quite confiusing at this point!!!! I think all will get more clear in the next chappie!!!!! I really hope you will update soon cause I want to know where this is going!!!! See you next time!!!