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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! The story just keeps getting better. It will be quite the challenge for Nat's little group to go up against the fanatics. I am also eager to hear an explanation of how Tucker found out that he was not Nat's brother. Very interesting. Please keep up the good writing.
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
amazing story. How come I didn´t meet with it before?
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow so stunning
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was absoloutly fantastic!!!! Thank you so much for the update!!!!I can't wait for the real smutt!!!! I loe this story!! See you soon!!!!
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it :-)
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow these chappies were also absolout fantastic!!!
7: I really like tev!!!! And I really like this flame guy too!!!! And Tuck was so strong not attacing Jill!!!!
8: Jack getting drunk well that was kind of unexpected!! And Pyrokinesis nice!!! And Now tuck not beeing his brother !!! I think that is great cause now they can be mates!!! And How Jack comforts him athough he himself is so down that was so sweet!!!!!
9: Tev is so sweet I really love him!!!! Nat and Tuck are mates!!!! Nice!!!!! I love how Nat tries to ignore his feelings!!!! Well am I guessing right that the guy in the end is precognetive or a fortunteller or something like that???
It seems that the reall shit is just starting!!!! I didn't quite get if tev went with them, did he???? Well I hope you update pace will keep this way cause I can't wait for more!!!! See you soon!!!!!
7: I really like tev!!!! And I really like this flame guy too!!!! And Tuck was so strong not attacing Jill!!!!
8: Jack getting drunk well that was kind of unexpected!! And Pyrokinesis nice!!! And Now tuck not beeing his brother !!! I think that is great cause now they can be mates!!! And How Jack comforts him athough he himself is so down that was so sweet!!!!!
9: Tev is so sweet I really love him!!!! Nat and Tuck are mates!!!! Nice!!!!! I love how Nat tries to ignore his feelings!!!! Well am I guessing right that the guy in the end is precognetive or a fortunteller or something like that???
It seems that the reall shit is just starting!!!! I didn't quite get if tev went with them, did he???? Well I hope you update pace will keep this way cause I can't wait for more!!!! See you soon!!!!!
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am in the middle of Chapter 4 right now. Tucker is playing with sharp and pointy things. Haha. This story is great so far. I just have to laugh at the dialogue between Nat and Jill and Nat and Tucker. Jill has a heart of gold for putting up with them. I like all the characters. Very good story.
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August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an absolout fantastic story!!!! I totally love it!!!! The brothers are so sweet and his sire is too!!! And I like the sharks as well!!!! I'm so sad Jill is going to die!!!! Is it possible that Tuck is his mate?? And I can't wait what will happen next!!! What exactly happend as he fed from his sire and how is Tuck going to take it!!!! I really want more!!!! Hope to see you soon!!!!