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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderfully sad story. You have an amazing gift for suiced stories. i hope you will do one more chapter to let us see the effect that this chapter brings onto people. but if you dont, then it will be fine too, because a clif hanger story is always fun!
XXXOOO
Dreamwritter
XXXOOO
Dreamwritter
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,
Well, let me say that the storyline is nice and could be a very great fic! Just simply a one-shot wouldn't do! O.o I think every thing was sort of rushed! I'd really like to read this in more detailed and more introduction of characters! :)
Anyhow, for your first attempt that was a great work! Keep on ... ;)
Well, let me say that the storyline is nice and could be a very great fic! Just simply a one-shot wouldn't do! O.o I think every thing was sort of rushed! I'd really like to read this in more detailed and more introduction of characters! :)
Anyhow, for your first attempt that was a great work! Keep on ... ;)