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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see how this story develops! It's so different. And Desmund is an absolute cutie-pie! Blushing so much.
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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I wanted to express my funny moment of the spam-proof message I received as I reviewed this..."messiest ho" XD
Second of all, you don't know how happy I am to read this explosion of creativity. Time, Fate, and Destiny embodied into physical(?) beings. I am curious, though...
Can Keir see everyone's soul colors only through the mirror or can he call up on that power whenever he likes?
Second of all, you don't know how happy I am to read this explosion of creativity. Time, Fate, and Destiny embodied into physical(?) beings. I am curious, though...
Can Keir see everyone's soul colors only through the mirror or can he call up on that power whenever he likes?
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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh, I like this fic! The idea is different and interesting. I am already loving Keir, I mean, who couldn't with such a sexy name? Lol, but besides that, his personality is amusing and hard not to like. I can already see him and Cailean together!! By the way, how do you say Cailean? Cause I keep saying 'Kay-lin' in my head, and I know that I'm wrong. The other thing about Keir that I love, is how he can see colored souls, and match people up. That is so cute in some ways, and just a down right original idea.
Desmund. He is a real cutey too. I love the cerulean blue hair! And his crush on Chron is adorable! When Chron just so happens to decide that he is interested in being more than friends, and Desmund is all; 'huh what?' Priceless. I think blushing boys (or men, or deities) are just deliciously adorable, I can't help it.
I also like your transition from one scene or POV, to the next. For a while I wrote in only one character's POV, and then I tried switching between POVs, and now I prefer writing that way. And the switch of POV sometimes accompanied by a different scene can be even better. It's more interesting to read about this and this happening, and then, Oh!, something is going on with this person too in this other place! It leaves you wondering about different pairings and situations, not in a horrible cliffhanger way, but just keeps the drool flowing in your mouth from the sexy guys, and keeps you coming back for more.
If you haven't noticed yet, I can be an awful rambler when I review. Somehow, they usually end up sort-of-lengthy. My thoughts leak out. Anyways! I can see already that I am going to be keeping an eye on this story, and on you!. . . .two. Lol, I gotta remember that I'm talking to two authors, not just one. I might take a peek at your webcomics, especially if they are slashy-goodness *wink wink*
Oh, and Smut-Power-Duo? How awesome sounding is that?! Holycrap, you two -just- joined today. I could see that you just put this story up, but you're really new around AFF? Or is this just your first joint account? Well anyways, this review is getting long enough (by a lot), so I'm going to say welcome to AFF (IF you are new) and I look forward to more! Lovely fic so far. Keep it coming!
Desmund. He is a real cutey too. I love the cerulean blue hair! And his crush on Chron is adorable! When Chron just so happens to decide that he is interested in being more than friends, and Desmund is all; 'huh what?' Priceless. I think blushing boys (or men, or deities) are just deliciously adorable, I can't help it.
I also like your transition from one scene or POV, to the next. For a while I wrote in only one character's POV, and then I tried switching between POVs, and now I prefer writing that way. And the switch of POV sometimes accompanied by a different scene can be even better. It's more interesting to read about this and this happening, and then, Oh!, something is going on with this person too in this other place! It leaves you wondering about different pairings and situations, not in a horrible cliffhanger way, but just keeps the drool flowing in your mouth from the sexy guys, and keeps you coming back for more.
If you haven't noticed yet, I can be an awful rambler when I review. Somehow, they usually end up sort-of-lengthy. My thoughts leak out. Anyways! I can see already that I am going to be keeping an eye on this story, and on you!. . . .two. Lol, I gotta remember that I'm talking to two authors, not just one. I might take a peek at your webcomics, especially if they are slashy-goodness *wink wink*
Oh, and Smut-Power-Duo? How awesome sounding is that?! Holycrap, you two -just- joined today. I could see that you just put this story up, but you're really new around AFF? Or is this just your first joint account? Well anyways, this review is getting long enough (by a lot), so I'm going to say welcome to AFF (IF you are new) and I look forward to more! Lovely fic so far. Keep it coming!