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for Savoring Time

by MichiXMaru

person sardo
schedule October 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the great story. They should definitely marry together.
schedule December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:O i hope that keir doesn't see!!! And i hope that the others patch it up... love this chapter!!! :D
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I won't lie. When I read the library scene I almost squealed like a girl...almost. As much trouble as Aileron made for Desmund and Chronus, I coudldn't help but laugh at the way he said and thought things. Desmund's slapping him was sure a surprise! Way to go, kid. And, when I first read 'deity of Nature', what first popped in my mind was Mother Nature, but that's yet to be seen. And Saird is so going to die...everyone knows it.
person Marina
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch 6- Glad to have been of help? Well! Looks like Chronus is more popular than I thought. The little segment with Desmund chasing after the imaginary cat and the receptionist had me laughing off my seat! Aww, Desmund...the poor thing. I hope Chronus will clear all of that right up. And, oh dear! Cailean seems to be having some trouble, too! Can't wait for the next update!
person IsLuRa
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You tell 'im, Des! "Aileron, you better go find another tower! THIS Rapunzel's mine!"

And Keir and Cailean are at it yet again. Why does that even surprise me? I don't think I've ever read of a couple rolling around in the hay so many times. I highly approve! *thumbs up*

Oh, no he didn't! Saird picked the wrong redhead to man-handle. I hope Keir gets him GOOD.
person Marina
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, there's something about this story. I don't know what it is. I guess, balance. Like yin and yang. Where Des and Chron are taking it one step at a time, Keir and Cail are act first/ask questions later. And yet at the same time, amidst the love and tenderness of Des and Chron, there is a little lust in there. And amidst the lust between Keir and Cail, there is a little love and tenderness there. I love it.
person IsLuRa
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. I just about fainted reading this update. Good thing I saved the best for last (yeah right, I just clicked on the first update I saw, lol). I mean, I love Zarz and gang and all, but this gang's been progressing lots. The shelf and the table...that library's never going to be the same again. *fans self*

And shoot, Chron. You disappointed me. Here I was waiting for him to eat Desmund right up and he goes "let's get some rest". Desmund should rape him in his sleep, the mood killer.
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! poor cailean... thats so unfair... evil god! actually... you storytellers are the evil ones for making this hapen to these ficticious characters! EEEVVVIIILLL!!! however, that by no means, means that you can stop writing... :P LOVE IT! :D
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I. LOVE. IT. More more more pleeeeeaaaassseee!!!! :D
person IsLuRa
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chronus and Desmund are so cute. I just love them! And look at Desmund's initiative! See? He CAN make the first move when he wants to. Mm-hmm. And Keir and Cailean are at it again like rabbits! But, then that messenger had to come and ruin their flow. If I were Keir, I'd back slap him on my way to the office.