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by Aya

schedule March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Never mind Una! I'm in tears as well as Paw. Poor Paw. He loved MIk so much. And why would some Sidhe be glad Mik is gone? I thought Mik was good w/all the Sidhe?
schedule March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, I've been having problems following everything in the story and now you killed the one person I liked. Don't really know if I'll be back to try to catch up with the rest of this story or not. I was kind of thinking of dropping it before you killed Mik. Its just too hard to understand.
person Shoezies
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 77:
What is up with Lel and fainting? Lol I’m very proud of Mari…Except, I wouldn’t have stopped if I were her…
Chapter 78:
Ok, I’m really confused here…Talen’s a fake? Gahh….I’ll just read the next chapter and see if that helps. I’m still very concerned about how Paw (Whisper is more like it) is going to react to this malarkey…I don’t think he’s going to take it well at all…
Chapter 79:
Whoa! Who’s in bed with Lel?! (sorry these reviews are so short, I’m just eager to get on to the next chapter) Mari is a funny woman…
Chapter 80:
Ok, wow…Lel and Mari…and you’re excited about a funeral?! And people think I’m a morbid being (I’m teasing you lightly of course) Oh, poor Mari…She can’t have any more children and isn’t even able to see the one’s she’s given life too…That’s so sad…I personally, don’t do funerals…I go…but I don’t go to see the body …I can’t….I…want to remember the person how they were—full of life—not how they looked in a casket….I couldn’t even go into my own grandfather’s funeral…I stayed in our car and cried for like ever….Wow, I’m depressing…Sorry about that…Anyway, I hope that you update as soon as you can and that Mik is somehow still alive (I don’t think the gods would let him die and stay dead….he seems to be much too important to them)
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh God! Rel and Mari did the deed! Hahah A drunken blur. Out of pain.

I still cannot believe Mik is gone. Say it ain't so!!!! How is Paw holding up? He's gotta be devastated. And Mik's mom? This has got to be a set up. It has to be. Mik can't be gone. Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo not Mik!!!!!!!! And I would hope that ALL the Sidhe would be there to show their respect. What a sad, sad day it's going to be.
person Rose
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So, I'm expecting the world to go BOOM because various characters in Partners and Sequel have said that if anything happened to Mik, life was basically over...either because Whisper would open up a can or the Gods would.

If the author doesn't know if Mik is dead, does that mean that you haven't decided if you should end the world or that there's a character that isn't aware that the world is about to end or that you haven't decided who gets to end the world?
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WTF? Is he in bed w/Mari?????
person kaylez24
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dude! Lel did Not have a drunken one nighter with Mari! LOL
person Loves to Laugh
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, don't tell me Rel is in bed with Mari? LOL
I loved Muan's toast to Mik! :)

By the way I was probably the one who was suspect of Talen, I don't why, maybe because he couldn't make comments without the Council's say. Or maybe just because I had to blame someone for Mik's death, I'm just plain bummed out.

Also thanks for updating so quickly.
person Anon
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is horrible, why isn't Muan healing Mik?
Please update soon or I won't have any fingernails left!
Great, great, update!!!!
person Loves to Laugh
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, forgot to sign in Anon was me.