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Is Rel, or Lel, really a Whisper? What about Paw? I'm a little confused.

Una is pretty humorous tho; wanting a virgin b/c he hasn't had sex in over 400 yrs.! hahah

Hi, sorry was buisy and had a really bad last two weeks...and then I come back to find my Mike dead!
Sorry, but that really hit me, why? Sorry for being selfish, but the story isn't the same without him, you know. Can it be that the story run away with you? I had that too at one time, was a scary event, grimasses.
My new comp has baby problems, however, if you do not know if he is dead for good than no one does, dear.
What confuses me is the silent treatment of the gods so far...didnt you say that they adored Mike? Their silence gives me shivers. There is something up, and I wonder what happens if Paw reacts worse as he already does...didn't you say the world would end if Mike got hurt?? I am confused here.

Una...I never liked him. And his comment to Rel/Lel, about Muan being a piece and such didn't endare him to me more. sorry. I think he is a cold fish.

Lel is a Whisper then, alright, I already thought of something like that. It makes sense, however, yiou mentioned that one of both(Mike and Rel) was a prophet? If he is Whiseh, what was/Is Mike then? Is he now/ was he now the prophet then?.

You leave a lots of open ends that confuse and make one want to smash their heads into their tables, because it isn't making sense? No, Maybe I am just to slow to get them. Happened before...however, I am really lost here slowly.

Huggles from Germany, sury^^

Uhm, me again, forgot something.
Didn't Lillow mention to Mike that he would die at an OLD age?? Now I am even more confused if that is possible. Wasn't it she who can see the future?

Okay keys and pieces explained. Sorta. Mik is a key. Well we knew that from previous chapters.
But did you just say he was going to be reborn? To Rel? o_0

Love these stories. Really love these stories. I've very sad Mik died or is he? I felt like crying for Paw. You wrote some really great characters here.

Okay you got a god walking around. Now whatcha gonna do with him?

Chapter 76-79. Wow, it was Rel and Muan that did all the havoc when Mik went down and not Paw. LOL. I wonder if it's Mari that's next to Rel.

Woot! GO LEL, GO! I'm definite for a one-shot on how THAT night went. It'd be so interesting to see how Mari and Lel actually got into the flow of things and the whole mating so that Souse can have little people kits for pets. And what exactly was running through both their drunk minds and what tipped the scale in Lel's favor for Mari to fold into the results of chapter 80's morning.

Chapter 81. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Ayato, you've gone and done it. I wonder if Raya had anything to do with offing Mik to get Rel to be Lel for Una's resurrection. And silly Muan eating away at the rose like he may have wanted to do the same with Mik and Paw. Muan's final words were, ".......*munch, munch*........" Hm... -puts thinking cap on- Mik = sacrifice, making the deal for Rel to = Lel, in time for Una's resurrection; and Raya = the REAL Talen a.k.a. a piece of Rhal-ta to claim Mik (the key/sacrifice) w/o realizing that Paw/Auhi/Whisper is Ayato? Thus getting rid of Mik before the deal's done and in the end Una comes back and kicks some arses in line cause of a the gods not playing by the rules; hence Mik might get reborn as a deity or just plain resurrected.

Oh man. I'm thinking too hard here. This may be just very simple. XD Woot! Can't wait for the next update!!

Muan chewing on the rose made me smirk…He’s so adorable…And I just really wanna bear hug Paw…He needs one badly..well, another one.
UNA! It’s totally UNA! Oh, goodness! I’m actually excited, you’re right!

Seems that your characters like keeping their secrets about Mik and him either being alive or dead…I still hope that he’s alive…