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for Sequel

by Aya

person reader
schedule March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
so more? when?
schedule March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
rofl. i like Tusto. he's suave in a sexy way and i love how he handles Rel. -shivers- i wonder what kinda deal Tusto had a hand in.
schedule March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hahaha. I love Ashun's witty responses and Una's urgency to get Mik back and outta the 17 floors of hell. This is becoming interesting.
schedule March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahahahahaha. omg, Muan's jealous of Mari and Rel screwing like bunnies when they were drunk. i'm surprised that Muan didn't join in on the two making out, now that I think about it. Come from behind Rel and he and Mari could sandwich poor Rel. ROFL. another one-shot. What if Muan had joined in. XD now that'd be interesting to see.
person kaylez24
schedule March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Muan getting jealous now! A little late in the game.
Also he really doesn't have the right, didn't he spend a few days getting very close and personal with Una?
person Rose
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So Mik died because Paw didn't love him anymore? I guess Mik is one of those beings who life decides has never suffered enough. The being who worried about everyone, cared for everyone, sort of loved everyone...that's the one who's disposable? Seems like Mik went through the program and ended up in jail anyway.

I actually liked the stories better when they weren't so interwoven together. Partners started out at a great pace and then seemed to die a slow death as Sequel became the preferred story. Sort of like being pregnant with twins in China and aborting one when you find out it's a girl because the boy is preferred. I think I'll have to skip this story too. Sorry, but I'm not a fan of stories that so drastically change direction from the original premise/summary. Tried to hang on, but this is all a bit crazy.
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hehehe. all caught up. well, i was right that Mik was the key but I didn't realize that Talen was the key's decoy like when Rava had a decoy in the form of a child. this makes perfect sense. not all pieces are revealed or told as to which god they're a piece of so i'm still struggling with how Lel and Paw fits in if Ayato isn't born yet. is Lel then the whisper of the people like Paw is the Whisper of the Sidhe? (hope i'm spellin tat right) interesting.

rofl. Una running his hands over Lel's ass. oooooo a one-shot. -kicks head out of the gutter- hm... then does tat mean the the dude tat killed Mik is one of Illuva's pieces and Paw woke jerked Una out of his sleep because Illuva took things into her own hands?
person kaylez24
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
All that heart to heart, and history, then.............get your hands off my ass. LOL
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap! Una knows about Rel's family? Did Rel really kill them? Did he black out or something? I know he was in jail for the crimes, but he always denied it, right? I'm trying to remember back that far! haha
person Shoezies
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Una is a very deep man, when he isn’t trying to bed anything that appeals to him…I feel bad for Lel…Having that sort of burden placed on his head…But…if he could learn to control it and use it for good….Wow…the things he could accomplish….Nice to see that after Una has this big long, deep talk with Lel that he’s back to his usual self…Pervy immortal man haha This was a good chapter for me to read before I head off to class today. And yay on Mik’s soul being all right for the time being!

What was up with the Paw faking thing? You lost me a bit there...Perhaps I've been reading the chapters too fast and not absorbing certain important details...