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person Angela
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi

I only discovered your stories in the last couple of months and I'm really enjoying them.

I would like to ask why do you keep having people (paw, una, etc) insist that Rel is called Lel and that they won't call him anything else and then have them call him Rel all the time. If Rel is such a bad name for him they should stop calling him that like they say they will.

Angela
schedule April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha!!! Bone jumping! Hysterical! So Rel has to seduce Muan. Can't wait to read THAT chapter! lol

Happy Good Friday and Happy Easter if you celebrate it. I hope you feel better!
person kaylez24
schedule April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Una is a trip.
Jump his bone.

Rel - jump his bones

I meant what I said.

LOL
person js
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little confused about why Una was insistent that Lel be present at the meeting. Or is that going to be explained later?
person Shoezies
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed in like forever...Life's been....throwing a hell of a lot my way and I had some stuff to...try and deal with....anyway, I've been keeping up on the reading (was confused, still kinda am, but eh). Poor Lel and not understanding about why he isn't allowed to touch himself haha...and I sympathize with that guy who has "ADHD"....It sucks...I can’t wait for more! Oh, on a side note, the forum is hating me and won’t let me post anything recently…just so you know.
person kaylez24
schedule March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Why does Una need all of that? All those people, equipment, guards?
person Avernion
schedule March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I still don't like Una. I don't think I'd be able to stand five minutes with him. I do love Mari however. I would say I'm glad she got the rights to her children, but wouldn't be true, right. They just got shifted over to Una. At least she can be happy about the fact that she will have a child, otherwise Una wouldn't fight for the rights to it right? I also think it's amusing that Una has such a girly name. I think I will begin to call him the Girly Named One. My humor just rocks that way.
person kaylez24
schedule March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wierd reaction. Even for the sidhe.
person Avernion
schedule March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It sure is embarrassing that they know of every little sexual thing he does. He sure needs to learn to put himself on mute.

I kind of feel like their punishment system is a bit unfair. They freeze him out because he did something he didn’t know he wasn’t allowed to do. They should at least first explain to him what he did wrong instead of leaving him guessing. Because, was he wrong in the simple fact that he was masturbating? Or was it that he thought of a God while doing it? Or was he not allowed to think of anyone at all because that is rude? Was he wrong in thinking about Muan? And how can you know masturbation is a no-no when they encourage you to have sex with everyone and one more, but not the one you love? Masturbation seems a bit mild compared to that? Why shouldn’t he be allowed to enjoy his own body by himself when they think it’s okay to do it with a stranger? What are they angry at? What part of what he did was wrong? If they’re not up front with him, how is he to learn and not do it again? Doesn’t this become just guessing-games? What does he learn from that? Lol, if it was me I would masturbate all the time just to spite them off because I thought they were rude bastards who tyied to dictate what I could and couldn’t do with my own body without even bothering to tell me, the one with said body. Then I would get totally pissed off and push all of them away. I sure hope Rel handles it better than I would ^^;

Well, I guess I sure am not a sidhe. Some parts of them just pisses me off ^^;
person js
schedule March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope you feel better! I loved the chapter, by the way. :o) Also, I was wondering if you would consider adding a sort "character profiles" or encyclopedia to your website? There are a lot of characters and I think it would be helpful to have that as a sort of reference when reading. Of course, it's probably a huge undertaking, so maybe something to think about in the future.