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by Aya

schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww, Muan loves Rel. He's so sweet. And since when did Muan speak English so well?????? When did this happen??? He speaks English better than Paw!! Like on a level w/his sister and Souse!
person js
schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lol...Rel is very amusing when he's drugged. I wonder what Muan would be like in the same condition?
schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Go sit on Muan and rotate! Hahahahah Love that one!!!!


Rel is only 18?? I knew he was young, but I thought he was in his 20's. So, Rel was married and had a kid and that was BEFORE he was 18??


Thx. for the answer to my Muan question. I didn't realize they were silently speaking to one another. Is that what you would call it? Silently communicating?
person js
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving Mm and Lel as a couple. I can't wait to find out what you have in store for them next.
person js
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That misunderstanding with Ashun and the term, "go with" was so funny. :) And I was surprised by how hurt Rel was that Muan didn't label their relationship. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Also, thanks for explaining Galt, I knew that I should know him, but I lost him somewhere.
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, did Muan think Rel was stupid b/c Rel didn't understand that Muan really liked him? Did he say it b/c Muan thought Rel couldn't figure out how much Muan liked him?
person Loves to Laugh
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have to love "Lel" and his insecurties, and loved the kiss Muan gave him at the end,
person js
schedule April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I forget...who's Galt?
person Loves to Laugh
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, It's been a while since I left any comments and I apoligize. But I just caught up on the story and have to say it is exciting as ever and I look forward to what will happen next. Partners had me bummed out when Mik died and I a happy to see him and Paw back together.
I have to say I already love Muan sister and hope to learn much more of her. Great job as usual!
person Shoezies
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I still think Mari is pregnant...she's got cravings, morning sickness, the mood...She's pregnant....I'm sure of it...

Rel will want more and more sex, huh? Somehow, I'm thinking Muan won't see a flaw in this haha...

I feel your pain with the whole being sick issue...have a nasty headcold thing...can't breathe through my nose, sore throat...all around icky feeling....not fun