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for Sequel

by Aya

person Loves to laugh
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whether long or short it is always a pleasure to find one of your stories updated. This was an especially great pleasure as we find that Mm is feeling better and Rel is concern enough to stay sitting so Mm can keep his head on his lap.
Both characters are coming alive and are both ones I want to cheer for as they develop. Thanks for the great work.
person Suryallee
schedule November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dont touch a female...somehow I doubt it that this is an issue with Rel here...however, poor Mm!
He is really on the bad end of things.
...whines. I like him, I really do and Rel too...pets him, brave little Rel =^^=
schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh Rel's funny; getting those little jitter when he looks at Mik! He better watch out; Paw will skin him alive if he tries anything! Rel and Mik didn't recognize each other? Didn't they meet when they picked Rel up from the jail? On the transport bus? Oh, and did I miss something in Partners: what's wrong with Paw?
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, when did Rel get so sympathetic and caring? He's so sweet w/Mm. Maybe Palt or Essuan can heal Mm w/o surgery?
person Loves to laugh
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's always a pleasure to see one of your stories updated and you have spoiled us with have one or the other updated each day (most days both). I was sorry to hear you have been ill and hope that you will have a quick recovery as it's a bummer to work when you are not well.

I have loved "Partners" from the beginning even if I am not one to leave many reviews, it is outstanding work. "Sequel" is following in the same great direction and I have especially enjoyed the growning relationship between Mm and Rel. It will be fun to see in what direction you take them as Rel seems to have taken a new lease in life.
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Maybe Mm is a healer? And he healed his own hand? Is it weird that Mm's tooth was sharp enough to cut Rel?
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, ok, I was just in the shower, wondering why I thought Souse's name was pronounced like Suzy instead of ouch and I realized that there's a word souse; to soak w/water and it's pronounced sowse and I thought: what an idiot I am!!!!! So now, after 150 chapters, I have to mentally change his name to Souse with an ow.

So, yeah, I'm stupid.
person suryallee
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nenta?
Is that behind the black veil you spoke of?
schedule October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I was misprounouncing Souse's name! I thought it was like Suce, or Suse, with the uu sound like Suzy, not ow like cow. So his name is pronounced like Sowse?

So that's why they were killing all the Sldhe? For their bones? That's really disgusting.
person wizli
schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If you were hoping we'd like Rel as much as Mik, well... it's happening!. I think a big part in my starting liking him was his story - as told by Mary in Partners- 'cause I felt simpathy, not pity. Or Mik felt that. Seems like Rel will be a good partner, he's getting into the mindset of a good partner faster than Mik, adapting to his Sidhe behaviour and he's doing great with the broken male, considering their circumstances.
Who killed Rel's ex-wife and lover?. I bet Paw knows, or could know, but I don't thing Mik will think to ask.