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I want to kick Rahl-Ta but I always want that...anyways, I hope he isn't doing any of his *normal* bad things to them, because that two deserve to be left in peace. And Illuva needs a kick too...ignore me, I just dont like them(Rel and Mm ) played with. I like Rel's new Name^^ Lel...snickers.
I hope you feeling better, I was worried! T_T

More more! I wonder if the chapter for "A is for...." before, during or after the incident with Mik and Auhi needing to go to their second t.v. conference/interview thingy. How will Rel and Mm's relationship develop? What is causing Rel's decline in body mass? Will they ever get a place for themselves or stay in confinement? I wonder wat Mm will do if he's introduced to the tribe n how well Auhi n Mm will interact considering that Auhi is Whisper and Mm is still broken n in the process of being fixed? Hm.. lots of questions n I can't wait for the rest of the chapters to come out!!

I love this story ^^

It's so refresing to read about people in these stories doing human things like going to the bathroom! You're the only author I've read who wrote about it! I remember when Paw went and poor Mik had to shave in the kitchen! It was hysterical! Of course, I'm sure Mik didn't think it was so funny, not being able to go in the bathroom for awhile! Anyway.....all these other stories; none of the characters even take a leak! They just use the bathroom for showering. And sex. And maybe showering and sex together. But kudos to you for putting more humanity into your stories!

Ok, so Mm is pretty smart. Was he associating Rel's groin w/the picture of Rel's dad? And he could figure out just what happened to Rel? Pretty intelligent.

Rofl, I loe their interaction! It is priceless^^
...leaping around the food-card and Rel...you made me laugh.

Ah, I should have read this chapter before the Partners update! Now I know what they were talking about! lol

Does Mm not have any knowledge of sex between two males? Or just sex in general? Im a little confused.
Also wouldnt it be about time they were allowed to leave the "cell" now that Mm is feeling better? For Mm to try and meet the other sidhe and perhaps join their group in the future.

Thanks for the always interesting chapters!

A very abstract form of writing sex...somehow it fits.
I guess Mm was ubset about his own lack of control?
Good thing he did not freak out like before when something went down the wrong way.
And a person that got raped has such troubles with the body and the mind in the aftermath.
I can tell a tale about that, so, its not wrong to write it such a way, it is fitting.
Actually it says allot that Mm could make Rel enjoy at least a part of it, it tells tales about his unconcioues trust in the sidhe,
despite his former experiences with it in prison.

Jesus, what's wrong w/Rel? Is he gonna just pass out and then feel better the next day? And Mm was so wonderful w/him; feeling guilty and only wanting to help him. It was sweet that Mm could reciprocate being so kind and gentle w/Rel, the same as Rel was w/Mm.

Sweeet! ^____^