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by Aya

person Loves to laugh
schedule December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Mw'n kess Lel too."

This was a perfect ending to this chapter, I love the fact that we are just beginning to find out just what Muan is capable of.
Love that Hohi is sneaking into there apartment and making himself at home, he is a love even (or especially with his broken english).
schedule December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Rel is some sleeper :)
schedule December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, Muan can read Rel's mind? It was cute how Muan was getting "touchy" w/Rel and Hoi (sorry, I forgot the way his name is spelled!) didn't like it. But why doesn't Muan act like that when he and Rel are alone?
person js
schedule December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww... I loved how you ended the chapter. :D
person BlackOpalReborn
schedule December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this story so far! I almost like it better than partners. ( feel like it jumps/transitions between chapters better/more smoothly) Muan & Rel are such an interesting paring!

I feel kind of as if I'm not getting a full understanding of their "world" though. Is this and Partner's based on a different story/world and I've not read it yet? (ie Namesakes.)

overall LOVE IT and can't wait to read more!
person Suryallee
schedule December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
1- Look tomorrow into your e-mail account^^ strange...its my birthday and you get gifts^^! However...
2- Rel is the prophet you spoke of, that much is clear to me since his dreams...I still wonder about mike and his choker.
It seems to me, Mari was possessed more then once from ...someone else? Makes that sense? It happened before, and Rel s the loud one Paw speaks of, At least I think he is, laughs. Emphatic? He seems to speak with his mind quite clearly.
Love the last updates^^ I really do!
I worked here like a mad girl the last days, drawing me my sh*** from my soul and even wrote some new chapters for my stories down.
Lately I found no time to it, too much here wasn't in order or went downhill. At least I have now a new scanner, lol.
Hugs you^.^
schedule December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Muan's always there to help Rel; it's so sweet. So Rel knew Mari years ago when Mari traveled w/her dad? Who she didn't want to be her dad? Who she passed off as her grandfather?
schedule December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally got over to Sequel. I like Rel and I really, really want to know what happened with the wife and the lover. :) Happy Holidays.
schedule December 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow great chapter
schedule December 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Maybe the Sidhe's bodies produce metal and then they're used for their metal and their bones for the medical equipment.


Ok, stupid, but that's the first thing I thought of after the Sidhe bones being used to people medical equipment.


Oh, and now I'm really confused! I thought Taln was crushing on Koln? Is it Rel?