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by Aya

person Rose
schedule January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There are 17 hells? Hmm. Thought there were more.
person Avernion
schedule January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
“Yes you did, young man, do not lie to me, I am a mother.”
Bwahahahaa! Man, I loved Mik's mum in this xD
person Shoezies
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What in the seventeen hells, indeed! So many questions...left unanswered...gah...Awesome chapter and I do hope that your brain un-gooifies!
person Loves to laugh
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"What in seventeen hells" indeed, just don't let hanging here!
I hope Muan is okay and I loved how Rel was a bit pushed out of shape when Paw questioned Muan calling him Lel. "Just like Mik and Mikkins." :)
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok, what chapter did I totally miss where Koln and Taln got together??????? I know I read all the chapters, but obviously I missed something BIG!!!!!

Could you let me know which chapter so I can re-read it? Thx!
person Suryallee
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope they didn'tbroadcast that again, lol. I don't think Paw would find that funny...rofl
person Loves to laugh
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
person Suryallee
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Jumps up and down in glee...I knew it!
So the three, Mik, R/Lel and Muan are deaths?
person Suryallee
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Happy new year dear!
Calm befor the *next* storm or what? Lol.
person Loves to laugh
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh Koln kissed Taln! But Taln was pushing his luck with poking at Muan, I was waiting for him to get a little riled or at least Rel to put him in his place. Taln has to work a little on his jealousy issues but maybe he will reassured with the kiss.

Also how cute was the look Muan was giving Rel and looking back to see if Rel was still looking. Two cute! I loved it! :)